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The Wayback Machine (4/5)

May 22, 2013 07:01

Title: The Wayback Machine
Character/Pairing: Wash/Taylor, Elisabeth/Jim, Mira/Guz, Carter/Skye, Others
Word Count: ~4640 this chapter
Genre: Romance, Drama, Action, Angst
Rating: PG-13
Summary: They’d all but forgotten about the crates of artifacts from other times in history, but then they stumble upon something that reminds them that while they’ ( Read more... )

character: josh shannon, character: alicia washington, character: nathaniel taylor, pairing: f/m, rating: pg-13, word count: wip, authors: g-m, character: others, author: jbn42

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mrs_bree_v_d_k May 22 2013, 15:36:50 UTC

The last line is classic, I´m still chuckling- part four out of five, that doesn´t sound good... :( Anyway, very nice chapter, Caroline´s adapting rather well (once she´s gotten over all the blood) and the family cuddle time was sweet, Gracie seems very taken with her new big sister, I was a little worried she´d be jealous.
Feeling a bit sorry for the young soldier, though it was funny when Taylor told him not to worry, that he wouldn´t let Wash hit him...
Maybe he can fall in love with Riley or something... Great update and even though it´ll unfortunately be the last chapter, I´m looking forward to more!