Just One Word

May 04, 2012 22:02

Title: Hair
Character/Pairing: Wash/Taylor
Word Count: 830
Genre: Romance/Friendship
Rating: PG
Spoiler Alert: None
Summary: She doesn’t notice how long his hair is until they’re caught in the rain.
Author’s Note: prompt "hair" bymakesometime Prompted BYzapf_chancery.

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pairing::ayani/wash/taylor, character: alicia washington, character: nathaniel taylor, .friday fic challange, pairing: f/m, author: sky_kiss, word count: 1000-4999, pairing::alicia/nathaniel, character: others, rating: g, rating: pg, authors: n-s

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bellebby May 5 2012, 07:15:24 UTC
SKYYY THESE WERE AMAZING!!!!

Hair: OhMyGod! I absolutely loved this. It was great and i loved the style it was written in It wasnt angst or smutt, it was just pure them.

Lies: This was so good! i love how these stories dont have a lot of dialogue but it can explain so much! I loved all the background info and the situation that Wash was in. Beautifully writen.

Death: Thankyou for filling my prompt! This story made me simultaneously happy (?) and sad. But mainly sad. Poor Wash, 30 years she spent without her love, without Taylor and the boys were only small then :( Beautifully written and I love it sooooooooo MUCH!
Hold: Can Taylor perform his nightly ritual to me?? Ahhh the love for this story, it is so Domestic yet fantastic.

Beautiful stories. GUESS WHAT???? I read Ashes during the week and i couldnt review cause of school but it is great Sky, marvellous and you updated it, colour me surprised :P

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sky_kiss May 5 2012, 18:44:02 UTC
Heeeeeeee! I am glad that you liked them. And you are welcome for the fill of your prompt, terribly sorry that it made you sad though.

*twitch* We do not speak the name of that evil here, my lovely. But I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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mikaelaprime May 5 2012, 11:51:15 UTC
These were all wonderful, but the one that affected me the most was 'Death'. I got a little teary reading that. Well done :)

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sky_kiss May 5 2012, 18:44:34 UTC
It'd been a while since I killed Taylor. ;) Thanks very kindly for reading.

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jbn42 May 5 2012, 11:54:24 UTC
Oh, Hair and Hold were both lovely, but Lies and Death both just broke my heart. Death actually had me in tears a little. Really, really beautifully done on all four.

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sky_kiss May 5 2012, 18:45:13 UTC
OH NO! I'm so sorry about any tears! But I am glad that you liked them! *hugs*

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morganel May 5 2012, 14:02:51 UTC
Absolutely wonderful. Hair and Hold are lovely and I love that he keeps his hair at that length because of their little moment. Hold...I'll just sum it up to, can we clone Taylor and distribute amongst each of us? Death, so calmly tragic, I didn't cry but I was all morning feeling, and after all the excitement in their lives they deserve to go quietly. Lies, was very much a look at her life from another perspective, it allowed us to see that maybe she isn't all confidence and she is afraid. Well done.

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sky_kiss May 5 2012, 18:46:35 UTC
Yes. I heartily approve of this notion of cloning and distributing him. This should happen. Like...now. That'd be amazing. And Death wasn't SUPPOSED to make anymore cry, lol.

*hugs* So very happy you enjoyed them, my lovely.

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makesometime May 5 2012, 21:48:01 UTC
So here. Have the keyboard smash result of my FEELINGS.

Hair: I love the sentiment behind this one so much. The image of them standing there together, drinking in their new home. And that he leaves his hair like thaaaat. Love <3

Lies: SO MANY FEELS. I love love love getting inside Wash's head when it comes to Ayani.

Death: O________________________________________________________________________O

Hold: Now, I'm sure it's very good. But I literally couldn't see it through my teary eyes. So I'm gonna go back and read it again.

Aaaaaaaand....

It's lovely. Sigh. I feel all warm and fuzzy now.

Love them all darling <3

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sky_kiss May 7 2012, 01:26:38 UTC
OH THE KEYBOARD SMASHING! The poor keyboard. *snuggles* I am glad your feelings have been had. And and and that you ended this feeling warm and fuzzy. Would be terrible if you ended up being sad. And I'm so very glad you liked them, my love!

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