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Safe In Your Arms (1/1)

Apr 28, 2012 18:33

Title: Safe In Your Arms (1/1)
Character/Pairing: Ayani Taylor/Alicia Washington/Nathaniel Taylor
Word Count: 8523
Rating: NC-17
Spoiler alert: N/A, pre-series

Summary: It was strangely close to perfect. Until she saw the little red dot dancing prettily over her lover's chest.

Author's Note: I feel like I could have worked more on this, but it's ( Read more... )

pairing::ayani/wash/taylor, character: alicia washington, rating: nc-17, character: nathaniel taylor, word count: 5000-9999, pairing: f/f, pairing: f/m, authors: g-m, pairing::alicia/nathaniel, character: others, author: makesometime

Comments 14

mercscilla April 28 2012, 18:15:50 UTC

Like I said, I skimmed the edges of the A/W stuff and concentrated on the T/W goodies. xD (Though the background story is quite interesting as well!)

You gave them some really sensual and hot moments (I love the one in her room with the unifrom comment. *flails*) and every time we find between the lines the deep love they have for each other. <3

Love the whole set-up you have for them, love. BAMF bits are always my favourite. :D

makesometime April 28 2012, 22:28:56 UTC

I thank you for the comment about the background story! That was the bit that really bugged me - for a while it was a series of smut scenes barely strung together.

Glad you liked the uniform bit, twas a last minute addition :D

*snuggles* Thank you so much!

sky_kiss April 28 2012, 19:30:04 UTC

YOU FINISHED IT! *clutches ( ... )

makesometime April 28 2012, 22:48:08 UTC

I do not... I can't... how do I appropriately respond to a review of this magnitude of AWESOME? I shall start at the beginning, yus.

YOU FINISHED IT! *clutches*

I CAN HARDLY BELIEVE IT OMG.

OMG ZOE YOU FRAKKIN' GODDESS. YOU'VE BUILT AN ENTIRE DAMN WORLD AND THE POLITICAL INTRIGUE AND THAT LOVELY BUSINESS IS JUST SO DAMN RICH AND INTRIGUING AND I COULD READ AN ENTIRE NOVEL OF THIS. YES. YES I COULD.

I do not doubt I will be delving into it now and again in future, for sure XD I just love politician!kickass!Ayani and I'm sure Roslin will only enhance this XD

AND THE EMOTION. DEAR GOD THE EMOTION. WASH BEING SO TORN ABOUT HOW SHE CAN HELP AYANI AND AYANI BEING ALL FRIGHTENED (BECAUSE SERIOUSLY? WHO WOULDN'T BE?) AND AND AND THE ATTEMPT AT OFFERING COMFORT. AND BEING ABLE TO SEE WHAT THE TWO LADIES DO AT WORK BECAUSE ADMITTEDLY WE RARELY FOCUS ON THAT...SO REFRESHING AND PERFECT. SO PERFECT.

The emotions were so hard -__- I am thrilled you like them, because they beat me down good while I was trying to make it all make sense.

GUH! ( ... )

inu_midoriko April 28 2012, 22:34:45 UTC

*FLAILSLIKEAGODDAMNEDFRAKKINROOSTERTARD* <--------- Don't. Ask.

YOU....JUST....WHY DO YOU ALWAYS INSIST ON STEALING MY WORDS. JESUS CHRIST. THIS WAS AMAZING. YOU TOOK A SIMPLE PROMPT IDEA AND SPUN IT INTO SOMETHING FANTASTIC AND MEANINGFUL AND HEARTFELT AND SO VERY LOVELY.

Honestly, HONESTLY. One of my fav A/W made yet. I LOVE YOU. DESPERATELY. I also second everything Ney has said. Because she has twin linked my words. SO YES. I LOVE THIS AND I LOVE YOU AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS BEAUTIFUL PIECE.

makesometime April 28 2012, 22:52:25 UTC

You say don't ask, but now I totally want to XD

O____________O I DID NOT CREDIT YOU WITH THE PROMPT. A thousand apologies gorgeous one. Know that for me to produce this it was a truly brilliant prompt ^^

I LOVE YOU TOO OMG. SO much. Thank you for the lovely words. *clings*

jbn42 April 29 2012, 01:44:04 UTC

*FLAILS*

Love this. Alicia protecting Ayani, Nathaniel showing up. Perfect. Just love it.

makesometime April 29 2012, 08:30:09 UTC

Awesome, I'm glad you think so! Thanks! :D

morganel April 29 2012, 04:16:03 UTC

So it's midnight and I'm incoherent and my throat is huuuuurting me, but you have nothing to worry about, because this was wonderful. I'll be honest when skirting the comments is the funniest aspect of reading something, especially from Brit and Nelly. SOULHUGGINGSMUT, I shall use soul hugging, it sounds so nice. I could see everything, fabulous imagery...I mean at times the amazing imagery could be creeping on some intimate moments, but it was so wonderful and the thought only occurred to me a second ago, so nevermind, I'll just stick to great imagery, and plot, and SOULHUGGINGSMUT. I have to say Alicia and Nathaniel's interactions were priceless. You're amazing. And now I'm going to die. -_- <3

makesometime April 29 2012, 08:35:30 UTC

I'm sorry your throat hurts :( Thank you for taking the time to leave a review <3 I'm so pleased you liked the imagery, that's fantastic :D