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Commander Taylor's Little Cadets (2/5)

Mar 24, 2012 23:15

Title: Commander Taylor's Little Cadets
Pairing: Alicia Washington/Nathaniel Taylor, Jim Shannon
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1473
Genre: Humour, Fluff, Bromance
Spoilers: None
Summary: It was supposed to be Nathaniel's class of kids to teach. Somehow the task became hers...and Shannon's.
Author's Note: Oh hey, look at that, a gift for Sky xD. Wonder how that ( Read more... )

character: alicia washington, author: inu_midoriko, pairing: f/m, word count: 1000-4999, authors: g-m, character: others, pairing::alicia/nathaniel, rating: pg, character: jim shannon

Comments 11

sky_kiss March 25 2012, 03:28:56 UTC

xD THE LAST LINE IS THE GREATEST THING I'VE EVER READ, NEL. BUAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Jim, you are such a troll. Such a perfect, glorious, troll. I love you desperately.

And I love YOU desperately cause this...this is the most perfect thing. OMG. THE BROMANCE. It is strong with this one. And I love it so much. I love Jack, and and and and "what has Taylor been teaching you" and and and....SO PERFECT.

inu_midoriko March 25 2012, 03:33:37 UTC

MWAHAHAHAH I AM SO VERY HAPPY YOU LIKED THIS!

I will not lie, Jack is based off a little kid at the place where I ninja things, who wants to be a shark lolz XD.

BUT YES! I AM GLAD YOU LIKED THE ENDING. IT CAME TO ME LIKE A LIGHT BULB. IT WAS MY MOMENT OF EUREKA!

mikaelaprime March 25 2012, 04:13:49 UTC

"What's Taylor teaching you, nowadays? You know, besides how to please him."

Absolutely LOVE it! The entire chapter was great but that last moment was just the icing on the cake :)

inu_midoriko March 25 2012, 11:23:25 UTC

:D!! Thank you! <3!

makesometime March 25 2012, 09:51:01 UTC

Fics that end with Jim running away from Wash will never serve to be anything other than COMPLETELY delightful XD

I love this! The snarking. SO fantastic.

inu_midoriko March 25 2012, 11:23:55 UTC

YUS! I AM SO HAPPY YOU THINK SO BECAUSE I THINK SO TOO! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA RUN JIM! RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!

mercscilla March 25 2012, 11:12:51 UTC

Oh, I love this SO MUCH!!! Kidas are a weakness of mine and yours are all so darn cute and adorable and witty! *snickers* The little 'Slasher' has my heart. ♥

Jim, the troll, has the time of his life FOR SURE! xD He just can't stop baiting Wash, even though he knows he won't survive it. ROTFL. RUN, JIM, RUN. <3

I adore every single scene of this but the last line beats it all. :P

inu_midoriko March 25 2012, 11:24:44 UTC

:D!! YUS! I AM SO PLEASED YOU THINK SO! So, so so so so pleased <3!

jbn42 March 25 2012, 13:41:56 UTC

Squee! Slasher Jack. Just adorable, love it when Wash salutes him. : )

And that last line was perfection.