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inu_midoriko in terranovafanfic

Le Bal Masque Kobol

Mar 20, 2012 00:24

Title: Le Bal Masque Kobol
Pairing: Ayani/Taylor/Wash
Genre: PWP
Word Count: 7210
Rating: R
Summary: It takes two to tango, it takes two to say 'I do'. It most certainly takes two to get Alicia Washington in this situation.
Author's Note: Done for my lovely Bamfettes over on twitter. I swear, you ladies inspire everything I do xD

( May I have this dance? )

pairing::ayani/wash/taylor, character: alicia washington, character: nathaniel taylor, word count: 5000-9999, pairing: f/f, author: inu_midoriko, pairing: f/m, rating: r, authors: g-m, pairing::alicia/nathaniel, character: others

Comments 12

sky_kiss March 20 2012, 04:51:03 UTC

*sniffs* Have I mentioned how much I love you yet today? Because I love you, lady.

I'll never be able to figure out exactly HOW you make things so sexy but you ALWAYS DO. It's absolute madness. The masquerade and the imagery with their costumes and the dancing....guh, the dancing.

And Taylor giving orders...

That may have broken my brain a little. I will not lie to you. But it was totally worth it. Yes, indeed. YOU GODDESS.

inu_midoriko March 24 2012, 15:31:07 UTC

YAY!! I love you too! <3 This indeed bodes well for the both of us :D!

Lololol absolute madness, you say? I THANK YOU! xD Won't lie, Zoe inspired the masquerade theme haha Oh yes. That woman and her inspiring ways.

I AM GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT! Even if I broke your brain a bit lolol xD <3

jbn42 March 20 2012, 12:21:56 UTC

Wow. I'm a little melty over here after this. Love, love, love it, especially the fact that they were playing a game to seduce Wash. Brilliantly done and incredibly hot.

inu_midoriko March 24 2012, 15:31:46 UTC

:) Thank you!!

makesometime March 20 2012, 20:54:18 UTC

Right, let's focus this review on the things that stuck with me all day, because those are the bits that take this from AWESOME to OMGFLAILYEPICJOY:

1. Wash and Ayani as black and white swans. Genius. Beautiful. A fantastic way to show them as two opposites joined by a love for each other and the one man in their lives.

2. Wash arching back into Taylor and teasing him back - GUH. I loved that moment when you sent it to me and I loved it even more in the course of the story. I ADORE proactive Wash.

3. Taylor trying to break Wash's concentration towards Ayani at the same time as demanding it remain o.o sohot.

4. The ENDING OMG. The thought of him giving Wash orders on how to pleasure his wife is just SINFULLY delicious. SINFULLY. OMG

Those are just the key moments my darling, I adored it all.

inu_midoriko March 24 2012, 15:35:09 UTC

All day, you say? My, my, I knew how work this one pretty decently then ;)!

1. Thank you!! And it was all inspired by you! :D So I thank you a thousand times for it <3!

2. :D! Proactive Wash FOR THE WIN!

3. Heeee yes! I am glad cuz it was rlly hot in my head and I hoped to dear god it was still hot on screen XD

4. Grinning like a fox right now :D! <3! Thank you, my love!

I am glad! Oh yes indeed! <3!

morganel March 20 2012, 21:21:07 UTC

As you know I read this in class today and it was sooooooo difficult to keep a straight face because this was so damn hot. I mean, woman, how dare you. No, no, no, dare all you want this was extremely clever, and sexy, and funny. Honestly, I printed this out and shrunk the font down and was cracking up in the car and in class. I had to fold pages over the others to hide all the glorious smut. It was very much very. So you did a fabulous job. You and a few others have this fabulous knack for making me be right in the scene, which in this case is down right weird, but not completely unwelcomed.

inu_midoriko March 24 2012, 15:38:41 UTC

Hahahaha Indeed you did read it in class XD! I'm glad your teachers didn't catch you and take it away. That woulda been embarrassing XD. BUT I'M GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT.

goblin_dae March 20 2012, 23:32:41 UTC

I was SO excited to read this from the Twitter teasers (ok, just the word "masquerade" because SQUEE) and it's BRILLIANT! I love the image of their contrasting costumes and the sneaky touching on the dance floor under the cover of anonymity. And then Wash figuring out their game and turning it right back on Taylor.

And then the rest just made my brain melt into a gooey pile of sexy bliss. Smut goddess indeed. Orders. Giving orders..just...yeah, brain mush. Happy, happy mush!

inu_midoriko March 24 2012, 15:40:57 UTC

Lolol! I'm very happy I did not disappoint! And I'm even happier you enjoyed this! <3 Lolol people seem to have enjoyed that prospect of him giving Wash orders XD. I may have to explore that in the near future.