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Wait, What? (8/8)

Mar 18, 2012 00:05

Title: Wait, What?
Character/Pairing:Wash/Taylor, Jim Shannon, Carter
Word Count: ~2830 for this chapter, 32,739 for entire story
Genre: Romance, Drama, Friendship
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Language
Spoiler Alert: Season 1
Summary: Alicia gets an object lesson in the meaning of percentages, namely that a three to four percent chance of something ( Read more... )

character: carter, character: alicia washington, character: nathaniel taylor, pairing: f/m, word count: 20000 and up, rating: pg-13, authors: g-m, pairing::alicia/nathaniel, character: jim shannon, author: jbn42

Comments 14

losthaven March 18 2012, 05:36:42 UTC

This has been one of the sweetest Wash/Taylor stories I've read. Thank you for this. It was a delight to read. And again another thank you to the Guz/Mira snippets you inserted. I definitely think Wash should start a pool. (:

jbn42 March 18 2012, 21:07:36 UTC

Thanks so much, and you're completely welcome for both the story and for the Guz/Mira shout outs, which now totally work in my head. : )

jenna_98 March 18 2012, 07:21:27 UTC

That is so sad. i kind of feel sad about lucas now.
Gracie is sooooo CUTE!!!
I hope you keep writing, you have an amazing talent

jbn42 March 18 2012, 21:08:19 UTC

Thanks so much! Now that I'm back to work, I imagine the longer stories may be done for a while, but one shots may abound. : )

makesometime March 18 2012, 12:06:56 UTC

Really really really loved this ending to your wonderful story. Alternatively sweet, hot with the kissage, cute with the interaction with her uncles, sad with remembering Lucas. Lots of emotions just beautifully done.

jbn42 March 18 2012, 21:08:57 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

mikaelaprime March 18 2012, 13:32:07 UTC

A sweet ending to a sweet story, though my heart did break a little when I read this:
Alicia smiles as Gracie offers him the flowers. “For you, Daddy. For bwother.”
Now that's what i'd call a bittersweet moment.

Eagerly anticipating your next fic :)

jbn42 March 18 2012, 21:09:54 UTC

Thanks so much - with the flowers, it just seemed like something a little girl would do, but I knew it was sad even when I wrote it.

morganel March 18 2012, 15:29:42 UTC

I've melted into a puddle of adorable goop. This was the cutest epilogue ever. I couldn't not grin when I saw that you used the first name I gave Reilly :D And Carter and Jim, that was SOOOOOO cute. I loved it. Amazing. This was really good, and you're really good at writing. I'll miss reading this. :)

jbn42 March 18 2012, 21:11:17 UTC

Thanks so much, and I'm glad you liked it! Since this one got really dark a few times, I felt like it needed to end on an up note, even if there was still a little sad in there! To tell the truth, I'm going to miss working on this one. : )