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Broken Apart (Taylor/Wash)(PG)

Mar 03, 2012 21:35

Title: Broken Apart ( Read more... )

character: alicia washington, character: nathaniel taylor, word count: 5000-9999, .friday fic challange, authors: a-f, pairing: f/m, pairing::alicia/nathaniel, rating: pg

Comments 6

bellebby March 4 2012, 06:17:39 UTC

Ohh I love these! You managed to do an excellent fix it fic with little to no background and in only a few short words! I loved it, please write more BAMF. Thankyou for filling my prompts :)

divinejoker March 4 2012, 17:38:20 UTC

Thank you! I've got a few bunnies hopping around, so... keep your eyes open!

admiralkate March 4 2012, 10:53:53 UTC

That was just great. I loved it.
I especially loved this line:
like the icebergs melting and the earth going around the sun, his words speak for themselves.

Such beautiful imagery.

divinejoker March 4 2012, 17:40:36 UTC

Writing these two came so easily. I'm really glad that you liked it.

jbn42 March 4 2012, 17:01:51 UTC

I love this! Really, really well done. Great detail, and I loved Taylor battling himself on being afraid to tell her how he felt. I look forward to more from you!

divinejoker March 4 2012, 17:42:34 UTC

Thank you so much! I can see him as a man who can act on his feelings before he talks about them. It makes for interesting writing.