Words: Grab, Jealousy

Feb 25, 2012 20:19


Title: Grab
Ship: Guzman/Mira
Genre: Drama/Romance
Rated: PG
Word Count: 951
Summary: A continuation of ‘ Alcohol’. While out in the middle of nowhere Guzman runs into the Mira.
A/N: Written for Guzman/Mira -Grab by morganel for ‘Friday One Word Fic Challenge’ - Week 6. Guzman’s first name comes from mercscilla.

Thanks to crystalkei for the beta and being awesome (any remaining errors ( Read more... )

pairing::guzman/mira, character: carter, .friday fic challange, authors: a-f, pairing: f/m, character: skye tate, word count: 1000-4999, rating: r, pairing::skye/carter, character: others, character: guzman, author: bellakitse, rating: pg, word count: 101-999, character: mira

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losthaven February 26 2012, 02:20:40 UTC
OMG! You've wounded me deeply! That Guzman wondered if her look of surprise was like his own did me in. The angst is overwhelming even if it was only a short piece. *applause* You're right when you say they would be angst-y and dramatic.

I've been on the lookout for this like Daryl is for walkers. LOL

And I loved Skye's jealousy. I had a huge smile on my face as I read it. Those two are so amazing together.

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bellakitse February 27 2012, 16:51:19 UTC
They so are and they're totally growing on me.

You're a walking dead fan, I LOVE THAT SHOW, Daryl is my favorite.

Glad you liked these, thanks for the review!

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crystalkei February 26 2012, 04:02:39 UTC
mmmmm....I love it when I beg you to write porn and you produce such lovely things. :D Yay! I absolutely LOVE IT. LOVE IT. And You're the awesome one, not me. :D

One of his hands leaves her thighs and comes to the back of her neck, giving it a soft squeeze to draw her attention, pulling back to look at his face, their eyes meet and hold as his thrust become more urgent, with legs tight around his waist she meets his hips with her own one final time before an orgasm rips through both of them. Throwing her head back, she rides out the ripples, her mouth open in a cry that she’s sure can be heard through the hospital.

As she comes out of her haze, she finds his gaze still on her, his eyes watching her with a steadiness his own breath doesn’t match. She smiles into the tender kiss he gives her, her brow raised as he grins widely when they break apart.

I absolutely LOVE this bit. I love it because he wants to look at her and there's a tenderness there that is just perfect.

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bellakitse February 27 2012, 16:51:35 UTC

Anything for you babe <3 <3

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morganel February 26 2012, 06:25:48 UTC
What brilliance to read at 1:30 am, brilliant! I love it, you rock. Bed time.

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bellakitse February 27 2012, 16:51:49 UTC
yay!! glad you liked it. :)

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makesometime February 26 2012, 10:25:57 UTC
Soooo hot Stef! Gah. Love those two crazy kids and their snarking.

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bellakitse February 27 2012, 16:52:33 UTC
XD, they amuse me, writing their snark is to much fun. thanks for the review Zoe :)

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bellebby February 26 2012, 10:43:56 UTC
Air. I need air! The last fic sucked the oxygen out of me! Ohh so damn hot they are. I just want Carter all to myself - Skye should be jealous :O. I love this soo much. I have no clue why i love it when people are jealous but I do. Thankyou dear for filling my prompt, I love this and it is fantastic!

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bellakitse February 27 2012, 16:53:15 UTC
i love jealous fics too :) it was a fun prompt to fill.

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