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Ache

Feb 22, 2012 02:40

Title: Ache
Character/Pairing: Wash/Taylor
Word Count: 1691
Genre: Romance/Comfort/Fluff
Rating: R
Summary: Wash has had a hell of a day. Taylor has a hell of a remedy.
Authors Note: Just a little something for inu_midoriko, who is feeling sick. I would have brought grapes and soup but alas, there is an ocean between us, so comfort fic it is! Unbeta'd, so ( Read more... )

character: alicia washington, character: nathaniel taylor, pairing: f/m, word count: 1000-4999, author: goblin_dae, rating: r, authors: g-m, pairing::alicia/nathaniel

Comments 5

inu_midoriko February 22 2012, 03:45:48 UTC

D'awwwwww I love you! This was so fantastic and perfect and even tho an ocean separates us, this was like a hug and I grinned and smiled the entire time and I'm just so grateful ^.^ Sick!Nel snuggles you! *snuggles* <3 <3!

I loved that she sprawled on her bed after a ridiculous day and just curled in her covers and I love that he massaged her feet until she was feeling better and then I loved that he made her feel *even better* near the end and then I loved that they SNUGGLED! OMG THEY SNUGGLED! I APPROVE OF THIS! And then the end was fantastic! Lolz, we know what Wash has on her mind ;). But yes, as you can see. I loved all of it and I thank you so much <3!

mikaelaprime February 22 2012, 04:02:09 UTC

I really loved the domesticity of this scene. She was in pain and Taylor was there to hold her and make her feel better. And what a gentleman! Giving her pleasure without the expectation of it being returned. That's love!

sky_kiss February 22 2012, 07:42:52 UTC

Suddenly I feel the pressing urge for a massage... O_O

YOU! AND YOUR TALENT! I am repressing the urge to squeal like a rabid fangirl, I want you to know that. It's taking everything in my power. This. Everything about it was lovely. Loved the touch of humor near the beginning. And Taylor massaging her feet...I don't like to use the word "adorable" for them but...adorable. So very sweet and tender.

AND SNUGGLING. I heartily approve. xD

How did the fandom get so lucky as to have YOU, lovely? There are just a million things perfect with this. I adore it.

makesometime February 22 2012, 07:46:06 UTC

Oh my darling! This was just brilliant, just just brilliant. The tenderness mixed with his love for her and their snarkiness, made me smile so much! You've got them both spot on in this moment of domesticity which is really impressive. Love love love.

morganel February 22 2012, 18:02:52 UTC

In need to a foot massage! That was wonderful! I smiled the whole time! Makes me think I should put an icy patch (whatever they're called) on my displeased back! I love the image of her sprawled out it was just do adorable, for her in particular. :)