To Put Her Back Together 4/4

Feb 16, 2012 21:59

Title: To Put Her Back Together 4/4
Character/Pairing: Skye x Carter
Word Count: 9223
Genre: angst/romance
Rating: (G-NC-17) R
Warning:  violence, sexual situations, trigger warning for discussion of rape
Spoiler Alert: If you've seen the show, you're good. 
Summary: A year after the portal is destroyed, Skye is still being stalked by Lucas and Carter has ( Read more... )

pairing::skye/carter, author: crystalkei, word count: 20000 and up, rating: r

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bellakitse February 17 2012, 04:48:54 UTC
your mood is accurate! this was awesome and a roller coaster of emotions, the drama, the angst, the creepiness that is Lucas Taylor

all the pain Skye is in, Carter's helplessness and and then the ending, they overcome a monster and get the happy ending they deserve with their baby, their family.

It's a hell of a story and i loved every second of it, so yeah i regret nothing and if nagging gets me more stories like this, then nagging is what i'll to, i'm very good at it. XD

p.s Carter with baby is my new kink, blaming you.

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lydiamaee February 17 2012, 23:21:54 UTC
Wow, I loved this whole story Crystal!!
So well done!!

“Oh, right, you’re fucking his daughter.”
I laughed, a lot.

And Carter and the baby was the cutest thing ever!!! I love it.

Can't wait to read whatever is next from you!!! :D

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crystalkei February 21 2012, 23:25:06 UTC
Ha! I loved writing that bit. Carter has no filter nor does he care to have one. XD

Lydia, you may have to taunt me and poke and prod me to write more. I'm starting to get a little burnt out on this fandom. Le sigh.

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morganel February 21 2012, 23:17:48 UTC
The accumulation of liquid in my eyes has resulted in a persistent/continuous tear from my left eye (gravity, as I am lying down...). I take back all and any sceptical feelings I had before reading this. I saw a "one word prompt" you filled on tumblr and y'know I dropped everything and checked your author tag. Guess what? Chapter 4 was here and I didn't even realize it! You break my heart with the little mentions of Wash *sniff* still hurts. I love Carter, you've done him so well. Everything is amazing. I loved it. JUNIOR, because it works so well!

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crystalkei February 21 2012, 23:24:11 UTC
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. I made you cry! I feel like that's some sort of accomplishment. I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you! This was seriously the most taxing and difficult thing I've ever written so I'm so glad that anyone liked it but to know multiple people liked it makes me feel proud. Thank you!

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morganel February 21 2012, 23:31:28 UTC
No problem! Then ending was perfect. :) you did superbly well!

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scarletalpha March 7 2012, 21:46:36 UTC
So that's the fight scene you were concerned about. Well I think it turned out just fine.

Hahaha, Carter provoking Reynolds and Jim.

I wondered what sort of trouble Lucas would get up to. No way he could stay tamed like that.

Carter's interaction with the baby was perfect. Sure it's changed him a little, but it didn't radically alter his personality.

Wonderful story. I'm glad I could prompt you even if it did cause you trouble. :)

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