Oh yay, I get to leave the first comment on your new livejournal and you probably have no idea who I am. I'm just some weird crazed stalker.... or something like that. And the last chapter was awesome. And sad. And awesome. I'm so sad now that it will be a long wait for the third "book".
That's all right, I lurk on some people like crazy and just never get up the nerve to say anything to them. So I am impressed by people who do. I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter. The third "book" will start soon but it will just be updated very, very, very slowly.
I usually don't work up the nerve to say anything.... I was lulled into a false sense of security by the fact that there didn't seem to be anyone around who would lynch me. I've been reading since you posted the first chapter of tenebrism (and was pretty much hooked after the first paragraph). I just love your style so much :)
Don't worry about the last chapter. ^^ It was awesome.
...I'm aware I should probably be leaving a review on the actual story, but for some reason I'm very bad at it. v.v Anywho, hello, another lurker. ^^ I'm very much looking forward the the third book.
Welcome to journal-land, I'm really crap at journals and such like, always forget about them and never too sure about comenting, I either lurk or babble.
No call for nerves, last chapter packed quite a punch; unexpected. I really liked Alan standing up to them here at the end, he's a lot stronger than he thinks. Is it worrying that the characters seem very real? I'm just going to put it down to you being a great writer so I don't have to worry about my sanity ;) That whole end scene was well drawn.
No problem with slower updates (other than standard impatiencs) but please don't abandon the story, I'd really like to see where you plan to take this.
Babbling and lurking, that pretty much describes everything I do too.
I'm glad about that; I was a little nervous it was too much too fast with not enough forewarning. Seems to have come off all right. Also good to hear the characters feel real. From 1st pov the hardest thing is to avoid making them you accidentally.
Definitely not abandoning it; it's my big personal project right now. I have many plans for it. :)
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I just love your style so much :)
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...I'm aware I should probably be leaving a review on the actual story, but for some reason I'm very bad at it. v.v Anywho, hello, another lurker. ^^ I'm very much looking forward the the third book.
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That's all right, I'm terrible at leaving reviews myself, so I understand. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
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No call for nerves, last chapter packed quite a punch; unexpected. I really liked Alan standing up to them here at the end, he's a lot stronger than he thinks. Is it worrying that the characters seem very real? I'm just going to put it down to you being a great writer so I don't have to worry about my sanity ;) That whole end scene was well drawn.
No problem with slower updates (other than standard impatiencs) but please don't abandon the story, I'd really like to see where you plan to take this.
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I'm glad about that; I was a little nervous it was too much too fast with not enough forewarning. Seems to have come off all right. Also good to hear the characters feel real. From 1st pov the hardest thing is to avoid making them you accidentally.
Definitely not abandoning it; it's my big personal project right now. I have many plans for it. :)
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