had a lot of fun, had a lot of money

[teromain]

GOOGLE IS FUCKING AWESOME.

Oh and also I might have got a chapter done or something.

Comments

[naatz]

lololol!!! PUBLIC SQUEEING IS HAD. ♥

|Meduza|

[mee_eep]

YAY update and revelations.

I thought it was really good the mix of reactions felt real and Alan and Keyd were so so sweet and together :)

LOL @ the alternative scene..mmm..muffins

[teromain]

Thanks! I'm glad it felt real, I was kind of nervous about that. :)

[dmlpacker]

Wonderful chapter! It was interesting seeing them interact with people outside of the war.

[teromain]

thank you! Haha, Keyd gets very nervous and awkward with people outside of war setting. :)

[acquiredsight]

Oh, God, I just spent the entire chapter on the edge of my seat. I could *not* sit still. I would read 5 paragraphs, and then get up and pace and wibble inside, and read a few more, and jump around some more. It is now 1:15 AM and I have successfully convinced my dog it is time to get up, what with all the pacing. Verdict: perfection in written form. Even though you probably hate it.

Random, but what does Keyd think about everyone's names starting with "A"?

[teromain]

Haha, thank you! I don't hate it as much as I did when I was writing it, the rewrites and changes that my beta suggested really helped it out a lot. :)

It actually doesn't seem that weird to him, since almost all of the clarbach names start with vowels, so he's not entirely unfamiliar with a lot of names starting with A.

[acquiredsight]

Ahaha, I was picturing him thinking about how very unimaginative Earth natives must be.

[harpal88]

a new chapter !!! thaaaaaaank youuuuuuuuuu!! (^_^)