Tenebrism VIII

[teromain]

Title: Tenebrism
Status: in rewrites
Chapter word count: 12,273
Warnings: language
Additional notes: This chapter is pretty much entirely new stuff that was not in the draft! Also I'm doing what I did last time and having a googledoc of it available that anyone can go look at and comment on; there are a couple notes and translations in there for

Comments

[darkblue_ice]

It's so sweet! I'm so happy you've added in a lot more of Alan & Keyd's interactions. <3 <3

[teromain]

Yeah, that was definitely a big thing I wanted to do with the rewrites; they needed to interact way more than the draft.

[espada0arani]

!!! Oh, I love how this is unfolding. This was so great. And funny.

[teromain]

Glad you enjoyed! :)

[teromain]

Oh thank you very much! I'm really glad to hear that. And I totally understand the lurking, that's what I do myself most places!