Tenebrism VI

[teromain]

Title: Tenebrism
Status: in rewrites
Chapter word count: 19,333
Warnings: language
Additional notes: Even longer chapter than the last one, which will also be split in a more finalized version of the story. But you get both halves because not a lot happens in the first part. The link below is a fake cut to my dreamwidth again. Fictionpress version

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[potatoe1988]

I'm just gonna comment here because it's easier than doing the Dreamwidth login thing, okay? Okay

[potatoe1988]

The second one is actually the one I remember the least, since it's the one I read least recently (I re-read the first one before you started editing). So that combined with the editing changes, it'll probably end up being like reading a new book. I'm definitely looking forward to it.

[teromain]

For some reason the second one is my favorite, so that's probably why I'm most excited about it and the changes. The plot that's not the relationship really isn't changing too much overall, it's just getting a real big polish and tweaking in places, but it'll probably end up seeming really different anyway just because of the improved writing + more consistent voice.

[potatoe1988]

When will you be working on that one? You said the Keyd's POV one was what you would be doing after the Tenebrism edits are done.

[teromain]

In like the most optimistic scenario, by the time the Tenebrism rewrites are done, Skigraphia will ALSO be done. Optimistically. After the second half of the chapter I already posted part of is finished (and it's close), there's technically only two more chapters (although they are as long as the rest have been) and an epilogue (which is fully written). So I sort of project them being done around the same time, at which point I'd start on the Chiaroscuro rewrites and Keyd's POV.

[potatoe1988]

How close is Tenebrism to being done?

[teromain]

Projecting four chapters left (possibly five), though a lot of what's coming up is entirely new stuff that needs to be written, but that often takes less time than heavily editing existing stuff. And its chapters are shorter too (except for this one, though this is technically two chapters combined). If I keep working with them the same pace I have been, I think they really will be done about the same time.