Tenebrism III

Nov 17, 2012 15:12

Title: Tenebrism
Status: in rewrites
Chapter word count: 11,781
Warnings: language
Additional notes: So this is a bunch of new stuff that was never in the first draft, mixed with stuff that was. This is where the rewrites really start getting pretty different than tthe original.
Thanks to radioredrafts for the beta.

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novel - tenebrism, light and shadow series, rewrites, writing

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storm214 November 18 2012, 21:12:54 UTC
Woo!!!!!!!!!! I love your writing, and I can't wait to read the rest of the story!

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teromain November 19 2012, 00:18:40 UTC
Thank you! :)

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evie222 March 17 2013, 11:37:40 UTC
My favourite part of this chapter is definitely the part when Alan tried to punch Keyd. The key word being tried . It was just so casual, the way that Keyd put him on the floor, and it reinforces the physical as well as cultural differences between them. Anyway, yet another great chapter :-)
By the way, how many more chapters are there left to be updated in Tenebrism? I can't wait to get started on the next books in the Light and Shadow series! :)

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teromain March 17 2013, 21:34:33 UTC
Thank you! :)

There are going to be eleven chapters in all (prologue + ten numbered chapters) and I just updated with the sixth one, so there are five left. I'll actually be taking the other books in the series down for editing as well, though.

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