On The Shelf

[teratomarty]

I'm not entirely satisfied with this story.  It's a mystery, or horror or something, and didn't flow anything like as smoothly as, say, some of my better porn.  So, I welcome any critiques or suggestions that you have.

Comments

[zsomeone]

Eew.

One thing I kept thinking of is the Mythbusters stinky car special. Is it possible to get the stench of death out of a fuck doll? Does silicone even absorb odor?

But on the other hand, death-smelling fuck dolls would be GREAT for necropheliacs.

[teratomarty]

Werrll... silicone is non-porous, so it shouldn't pick anything up. Their wigs, clothes and et cetera will smell like Hell forever, though.

[zsomeone]

Hmm. Well if you have an old silicone anything that you don't like, maybe try bagging it with a dead whatever and see what happens.

If you were wondering, it was your lovely description of the smell that got to me. I can take visuals fine, but have a sensitive nose. I bet death is like bleach, you get used to it while you're breathing it, but when you go outside it's like you can breathe nothing else for an hour or so.
For the record, I really hate bleach.

[dirty_baka]

haha, this would have made a great scene in a CSI episode. I enjoyed the humor of the cops. Oddly enough, it did not gross me out one bit.

[teratomarty]

High praise indeed in the Fuckup Steeplechase!

[0armoredsoul0]

I'm not sure whether to be squealing with glee over the literary awesomeness, or harfing up my lunch in the nearest toilet.
That was freakishly well written, and seriously disturbing as well as wicked cool.
You've done it again Marty.
:D

[trouble4hire]

wow that's creepy. Good job.