Comments | tenth_bananas: By Your Side

tenth_bananas

By Your Side

Jun 09, 2008 16:44

Title: By Your Side
Author: tenth_bananas
Genre: fluff
Rating: PG
Characters: The Doctor, Rose Tyler
Pairing : Ten/Rose
Spoilers: none
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Summery: Rose can't sleep.

Author's note: This is my first who fic, so please don't hate on me too bad.

( His Rose )

doctor who, pg-13, fic, fluff

Comments 8

naughty_rose April 7 2009, 23:05:39 UTC

great work! so sweet.... thanx for sharing

tenth_bananas April 7 2009, 23:42:39 UTC

Thanks for the review

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tenth_bananas April 7 2009, 23:43:26 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll be writing more Doctor Who fic.

juliet316 April 8 2009, 00:21:51 UTC

Nice and Sweet.

flyingtonowhere April 8 2009, 01:28:11 UTC

That was completely beautiful. His admission of his feelings, her turning up at his door, and the final bit of cuddling all equal a very mushy and happy me!

ladychi April 8 2009, 01:31:22 UTC

Sweet concept -- definitely loved your interpretation of the Doctor's POV. If I could make a small suggestion: I would ask around for a beta. You have some issues with the tense and grammar that could be easily fixed with a second pair of eyes. Great first effort! I'm looking forward to more from you.

tenth_bananas April 8 2009, 01:41:29 UTC

Thanks for the suggestion. I'll be using a beta more often. =]