Dictator of Fate [preview]

Sep 23, 2013 20:41

dictator of fate (preview - title subject to change)
exo/f(x) - kai/krystal (featuring the ever unfortunate oh sehun) - pg13
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he doesn't have the heart to stop her and jongin just wishes her eyes would glow like that forever.
a/n: this is just a preview, but in celebration of douc's birthday - everyone go wish her happy birthday!! - i thought i'd ( Read more... )

[ exo ], pairing: kai/krystal, [ f(x) ], .pg13

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bollywoodrecord September 24 2013, 01:42:47 UTC
spot for douc

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aoza September 24 2013, 16:15:32 UTC
yuri is going to hate me so much i think when i post my preview :)))))

also taking spot because i am unnie, hear me roar!

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bollywoodrecord September 27 2013, 23:15:36 UTC

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douc October 31 2013, 00:51:21 UTC
OMG I AM SO LATE, I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW TO BEGIN TO APOLOGIZE TO YOU SO THEREFORE NIKKA CAN TAKE MY SPOT

ANYWAY, ON TO EXPRESSING MY ACTUAL EXCITEMENT AND FEELS FOR THIS:

This is so dreamy! The setting of this is so perfect and I like that you made it slightly creepy, it's really unexpected cause I don't think I would have done that if I wrote this myself. Sehun here is great - always bratty and snarky, ofc and Jongin being all mysterious, mature and trying to keep his cool, really appeals to me. I can't wait until you post the next part/the rest and start to bring all the girls in - I'm going to love seeing their different characteristics, specialty etc. and ofc, the romance!

THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS FOR ME, I LOVE YOU XXX

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kirakirashahida September 24 2013, 01:51:30 UTC
spot because in class and sleepy

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kirakirashahida September 27 2013, 14:16:58 UTC
back because you complained

keke

actually since i read it already and you didn't add anything much i don't know what else to say except that i still really like "The door wasn't even locked. Oh my god I am scarred I am no longer a virgin holy shit what the hell is wrong with this place what girl just walks around naked what the fuck I am scarred Jongin I am fucking scarred for life."

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bollywoodrecord September 27 2013, 23:19:09 UTC
nice to know that's why ur back shida

also isn't sehun flawless

and thank you for returning anyways


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onceuponataem September 24 2013, 01:59:03 UTC
thx for (not) spotting for me u brat

breaks the mutual spotting love between us i thought we had smth going on like give and take like i spot for u and u spot for me like it was 4ever but alas good things do not last and i see u have broken the invisible treaty of spotting-ness!!!

on another note, bless the fact that so many of ur friends like kaistal bc u end up writing it more than u want hahahahahahauabajwhwushshshahh

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bollywoodrecord September 24 2013, 02:10:39 UTC
i didn't want to spot u bc u always leave the best spot comments for kaistal fics

no u still have to spot for me i am ur most loveable dongsaeng and u know it

i'm gonna kill this ship off in one of my fics one day i swear

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onceuponataem September 24 2013, 02:27:25 UTC
but when u spot for me it makes me happy. is my happiness less important than ur entertainment?!?!!!!!?!! shrugs, i dont think i can spot for u anymore after this betrayal tbh ⌒____⌒ and thats cool ill just make sure to kill sehun off in all my fics

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bollywoodrecord September 24 2013, 03:10:45 UTC
ur icon is mocking me

NO FINE I'LL SPOT YOU ALWAYS FOREVER

oh sehun is dead to me i dont even like him naomi come on

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wintercreamed September 24 2013, 09:23:19 UTC
Spottinggggggg ♥

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bollywoodrecord September 27 2013, 23:16:12 UTC

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wintercreamed October 1 2013, 06:51:39 UTC
//I AM READING THIS INSTEAD OF STUDYING ARE YOU HAPPY NOW//

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wintercreamed October 1 2013, 07:14:28 UTC
it's so intriguing and mysterious from the first few paragraphs and i choked at the part where sehun is shitscared seeing a naked girl smiling at him it's a scary to be honest but oh my gosh oh sehun sit down. i cried at those parts not even gonna lie.

your writing is flawless, more more more! ♥

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soshiexpress September 28 2013, 12:05:21 UTC
Whoa.

WHOA.

W H O A (yes I'm trying to copy Sehun)

This is very intriguing, and I don't know how I really feel right now, because this just amazes me in an unique way. I have so many questions popping out of my head, seriously. You write so well, I'm jealous

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soshiexpress October 4 2013, 11:23:07 UTC
I think you mistook me for someone else hehehe.

Keep up the good job! <3

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bollywoodrecord November 11 2013, 02:50:40 UTC
I'M SO LATE AT (re)RESPONDING AND I JUST REALIZED YOU AND THE PERSON I WAS TALKING ABOUT HAVE THE SAME DP ;______;

lol i'm so stupid

omg and thank you so much for reading and i also have questions popping out of my head because i haven't written much else lmao. SORRY I AM DUMB and i'm so happy that you like this, thank you for reading lovely ♥

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