Simple Offer - Chapter 7

[tenshishanai]

This time it's really chapter 7 ^^

Title: Simple Offer
Rating: NC17 overall (PG 13 this chapter)
Pairing: Roy/Ed
Warnings: Spoilers for the series, Yaoi, AU

Disclaimer: I'm playing with them, I don't OWN them.

Summary: A little offer and what came out of it.

Last time on Simple Offer:

“Love is love - no matter where it came from.”

~Seventh Time~

Comments

[amethyst_koneko]

O_O! WHAT?!?! *flails, dies* Maes isn't dead?? What the... How the heck... YOU! You're messing with my head! *throws Skittles at you* ^_^ Oh man. Does this somehow pertain to that sonofabitch rapist's trial? Please tell me Maes is playing possum to get evidence to make sure this bastard never sees the light of day again? OY! You just broke my brain! :) You better post the next chapter quick 'cause you can't leave me hangin' like this!! :)

[tenshishanai]

I think I really broke your brain... o.O Actually this has nothing to do with Ryans... it's Simple Offer not Two Colonels... Sorry.... But chapter 7 of Two Colonels will be online soon... (it has to be as I won't be able to post anything past the 31th August...)

So I hope you won't be mad at me... ^^;

Thanks for reading ^^

[amethyst_koneko]

*facepalm* Oh man! Talk about embarrassing! I am totally shamed! *^_^* Yep, this is what happens when you read too many fanfics at one time - you end up making comments for one story on another! *hangs head in shame* :) Ho boy. Hopefully by the time you actually do post the next chapter of Two Colonels I won't be feeling quite so cheap! XD (I can't believe I did this! :D)

[tenshishanai]

ah.. don't be ashamed.. It could happen to everyone... at first I really thought I had written 'Two Colonels' in the header... -.- I nearly panicked XD

So don't cry, okay? Everything's fine ^^

[greedy_lover]

:oooooo!! YOU... TEASE!! To leave it there!!! But wow O.O Amazing chapter (I'm so glad Hughes isn't dead in this ;_; that was too sad when it happened ;_;)

(sorry, I replied to this post, but it went somewhere else.. no idea why ><)

[tenshishanai]

<3 I love it to tease people XD

thanks for reading and commenting... I couldn't kill Hughes.. I still need him but I also need him the way he is now *chuckle*

(It went to the chapter index and I have no idea why it would do that XD)

[greedy_lover]

Me either. I was all O.o How did it get here when I went to comment on the chapter post? XDDD Lj, it's messes up all the time XD

[tenshishanai]

*lol* Yeah but at least LJ let's you comment :DDD no matter where *chuckle*

[kikiko_haru]

Okay, I must say, I'm enjoying this pretty well so far... but the the heck is a 'rubbery'? Some jiggly-like crime? A 'robbery', I could understand :D perhaps it's just a simple word substution, you do have the nack of often putting slightly incorrect words in your writing. But I think a beta would clear that up for you.

[tenshishanai]

*blush* that should be robbery not rubbery.... -.- damn I should have read it one more time XD

thanks for reading... I had an offer for beta but I don't upload very regulary... and so it kind of stopped before it really had started... sorry for that ^^;