Two Colonels - Chapter 6

[tenshishanai]

Title: Two Colonels
Rating: NC17 (for subject matter; overall)
Rating this chapter: PG13 (wow that's low...)
Pairing: Roy/Ed; previous OC/Ed
Warnings: Rape, Yaoi, AU (no Homunculi and BXB)
Spell-checked but unbeta'd

Summary: One Colonel was gentle the other was not.

Disclaimer: Sure... if I would own FMA... there would have been a second season

Comments

[amethyst_koneko]

Angelus! That's a heck of a middle name you gave the poor kid! Borrowed it from the doujinshi did we? ^_^

I see I'm in good company if Riza's offered to shoot the bastard too! :D She probably knows how and where to shoot someone so it hurts for a really long time before you die. *evil grin*

Ed's upcoming trial reminds me of the last time I got called for jury duty. It was a child abuse/homicide case. She mother tortured and abused her son to the point he died. Fortunately I didn't get picked to serve on the jury for this one but I did hear enough of the details from the preliminary proceedings that it made me sick. blecch. I hope I never have to go thru anything like that ever again!

Roy wants to be a part of Ed's life when this is over! Awwww! <3 :) I love how you write Ed! Excellent Ed voice! I forget how old Ed is supposed to be in this right now but you really do make him sound like the frightened little kid he is deep inside. :)

More fic soon please! :D Oh, how is Simple Offer coming along?

[tenshishanai]

Actually I didn't borrow it from a doujinshi... ^^; At first I wanted to call him 'Angus' 'cause I heard somewhere that it would mean Angel (and I liked the concept of Ed being called Angel).. but I found out that 'Angus' comes from some scottish God... and that wouldn't fit :D So I decided on Angelus.. 'cause it's still mean as hell XD *chuckle

[rsndgrass]

dun dun dun... plot thickens.

[tenshishanai]

definitely ^^
thanks for reading ^^

[tsukinochiyuki]

Oh my.... This is definitely very interesting. More soon please?

[tenshishanai]

Thanks a lot ^^ I'm trying to get in online by tomorrow ^^ But I can't promisea nything XD

BTW is that Akanishi in your icon?

[tsukinochiyuki]

Ok~<3 (v￣ω￣(v￣ω￣(v￣ω￣)/ｲｴｰｲ♪

Yeah it is! Why? ｨｪｰｨv(▼ω▼ﾒ)ゞ *ninja* i<3akanyan!

[tenshishanai]

I was just curious... I like their music and, well, I never have seen someone using one of KATTUN in their icon ^^

So I hope I don't have to be afraid ^^;

[irishmoon7]

*gasp* new developments. Very interesting! Great story, Please update soon?

[tenshishanai]

I'll try to update soon ^^

Cute Icon btw ^^