Simple offer - Chapter 2

[tenshishanai]

Title: Simple Offer

Rating: NC17 overall (PG 13/R this chapter, even at 13 Ed can't stop cursing)
Pairing: Roy/Ed
Warnings: Spoilers for the series, Yaoi, AU

Disclaimer: I'm playing with them, I don't OWN them.

Summary: A little offer and what came out of it.

Comments

[greedy_lover]

A new chapter! \o/ *grins* looks like Ed has Roy wrapped around his finger already

[tenshishanai]

Oh yes he has ^^ Thanks for reading ^^ I'm glad you liked it ^^

[brightygurl]

Hey you have the word "craze" when I THINK you meant "break?" there's a break in Ed's arm? Great chappie ^^

[tenshishanai]

Thanks for reading ^^

I found 'craze' when I searched for a word meaning a very fine break on leo.org (in german we have the word 'Haarriss' dunno if there is a word in English that can be compared to it) .. It is a break in the end... Sorry.. Maybe I shouldn't rely on the online dictionary too much XD

Thanks again
Have a nice day...

[irishd1988]

In English, we refer to what you call a "craze" as a stress fracture or a hairline fracture. I must say, you write (English) exceptionally well for one who's native language is German.

I'm loving the care and concern Roy is showing for Ed. All I can say is More!
More!!!

I will be looking forward to future chapters.

Keep Up Keepin' It Up! *wink*

[tenshishanai]

Thanks a lot ^^ I'm glad you liked it ^^
*blushes* I'll try to get better ^^ there is still so much to learn ^^

*goes off to edit chapter*