Too lazy to log out of my fanfiction account again...
*is blown away* o__o Oh, my goodness. What a brilliant story so far! I love the way both Sasuke and Temari are both in-character; the plot is so deliciously addicting that I can't help but want more! I think these two lines amused me the most:
“Hey. Not so rough. What is it? I offended your inner gay?” “JACKAL!”
*bursts out laughing* And the fact that Sasuke refuses to call her by her name until the very end (and it's still pretty sarcastic - typical of him) was awesome. I'm sorry you're not continuing the other story, but this one's pretty cool, too. You've gotten me into TemaKabu now! XD I really can't wait to see the upcoming chapters...good work!
teeehee. I've been craving TemaSasu all week. However. It's kind of sad that almost all of the TemaSasu fanfiction I found - sucks -_-. Sasuke's always this emotional twerp. Ugh -_-
Yays! ^o^ (Sorry, deleted last comment because I accidentaly cut off half of what I was going to say)
Yesshh, even if it was a lemon though, I'd probably read up to the start of the lemon, skip it until the end, and keep reading. XD And if it was too explict from the beginning, I wouldn't do that at all. XD
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*is blown away* o__o Oh, my goodness. What a brilliant story so far! I love the way both Sasuke and Temari are both in-character; the plot is so deliciously addicting that I can't help but want more! I think these two lines amused me the most:
“Hey. Not so rough. What is it? I offended your inner gay?”
“JACKAL!”
*bursts out laughing* And the fact that Sasuke refuses to call her by her name until the very end (and it's still pretty sarcastic - typical of him) was awesome. I'm sorry you're not continuing the other story, but this one's pretty cool, too. You've gotten me into TemaKabu now! XD I really can't wait to see the upcoming chapters...good work!
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But not to worry. Temari'll have a piece of him.
THANK YOU! I was like so worried. -_-
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I am so craving TemaSasu this week, and I think it's all thanks to you. Why be worried? I felt this was a fantastic job.
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^o^ Awesomeness! Sasuke is made for mocking and all. Great story ^_^
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Yesshh, even if it was a lemon though, I'd probably read up to the start of the lemon, skip it until the end, and keep reading. XD And if it was too explict from the beginning, I wouldn't do that at all. XD
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