A fanfiction. Looking for a beta, though.

Jul 20, 2006 12:06

Well, this has been an insparation, as I put the other fanfiction on the back burner ( Read more... )

temasasu, fanfic, tora_chan

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cocoa_pebbles July 20 2006, 23:39:39 UTC
Too lazy to log out of my fanfiction account again...

*is blown away* o__o Oh, my goodness. What a brilliant story so far! I love the way both Sasuke and Temari are both in-character; the plot is so deliciously addicting that I can't help but want more! I think these two lines amused me the most:

“Hey. Not so rough. What is it? I offended your inner gay?”
“JACKAL!”

*bursts out laughing* And the fact that Sasuke refuses to call her by her name until the very end (and it's still pretty sarcastic - typical of him) was awesome. I'm sorry you're not continuing the other story, but this one's pretty cool, too. You've gotten me into TemaKabu now! XD I really can't wait to see the upcoming chapters...good work!

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tora_chan July 21 2006, 00:22:43 UTC
Yay! You saw the sarcasm of what he said! Yes, pretty much that's the intention. He's mocking her. Which is what Sasuke does the best. He mocks.

But not to worry. Temari'll have a piece of him.
THANK YOU! I was like so worried. -_-

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bubble July 21 2006, 00:37:25 UTC
*nods* And you hit the nail right on the head with each sarcastic comment our favorite Uchiha made!

I am so craving TemaSasu this week, and I think it's all thanks to you. Why be worried? I felt this was a fantastic job.

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tora_chan July 21 2006, 03:34:05 UTC
teeehee. I've been craving TemaSasu all week. However. It's kind of sad that almost all of the TemaSasu fanfiction I found - sucks -_-. Sasuke's always this emotional twerp. Ugh -_-

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tenshibattosai July 21 2006, 04:02:21 UTC
Loved it. XD At first, I was hesitant because of the rating, but when I read through, I decided it was mainly safe. *grins*

^o^ Awesomeness! Sasuke is made for mocking and all. Great story ^_^

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tora_chan July 21 2006, 05:59:52 UTC
Oh, no worries. I will not write lemon without saying anything. If it was a lemon I'd state something :)

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tenshibattosai July 21 2006, 09:16:27 UTC
Yays! ^o^ (Sorry, deleted last comment because I accidentaly cut off half of what I was going to say)

Yesshh, even if it was a lemon though, I'd probably read up to the start of the lemon, skip it until the end, and keep reading. XD And if it was too explict from the beginning, I wouldn't do that at all. XD

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