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tensai55

[Fanfic] Alaska's First Word (1/1)

Mar 04, 2010 23:20

Title: Alaska's First Word
Genre: Humor/General
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: America, Western States, and Illinois
Warnings: none
Summary: Alaska says his first word and America can't figure out why everyone thinks it's so funny.

( How long do you think it'll take him to figure it out? Wyoming wondered... )

america, fanfiction

Comments 9

lovelylurker March 5 2010, 05:34:06 UTC

Oh this is so cuuuuute. I laughed. :D

alyssathai March 5 2010, 07:01:14 UTC

Omg this is too adorable! This is really iteresting because I had created a character for Illinois and also named him Abraham!! So cool >7

antrea March 5 2010, 08:45:39 UTC

Awww I love Willy, Abe, and Al! Just read Hamburgers too and both stories are brilliant. Hope you write more and introduce Pennsylvania! :)

rosadina March 5 2010, 17:19:17 UTC

This is adorable! One small thing that kind of stood out, FDR actually used a wheelchair a lot of the time. He had polio as a kid which pretty much destroyed his legs. Other than that, great fic! :D

tensai55 March 5 2010, 17:34:42 UTC

Thank you for bringing that to my attention. He used braces or leaned on someone in public, but he likely would have used the wheelchair inside the White House.

wistfulmemory March 5 2010, 19:24:59 UTC

This was a wonderful sequel to Hamburgers. I loved how America didn't quite get why everyone was laughing. I started giggling when I saw that you had named Illinois Abe. And Roosevelt at the end was great, and I loved that you were able to fit him in to the story. I hope you do more stories with the states.