Comments | tennyo_elf: Originally Normal 8/11

tennyo_elf

Originally Normal 8/11

Dec 07, 2011 13:38

Title: Originally Normal
Beta: Science and TJBW (lots of credit goes to these two, they did a wonderful job editing this story)
Rating: FRT
Genre: Season 7 AU
Summary: It's been a year since season 6 and things are going OK for Buffy. That is until things start going wrong and someone finally comes back into her life.
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spuffy, originally_normal, spuffy_fanfic

Comments 4

waddiwasiwitch December 8 2011, 16:43:43 UTC

Excellent chapter. The mind control was fair creepy. Looking forward to more.

tennyo_elf December 8 2011, 20:42:16 UTC

Thank you! Glad the mind control was creepy! I hope to get chapter 9 up sometime in the next week or so! <3

sarian71 December 8 2011, 20:01:09 UTC

"Their lips were just touching when the front door slammed shut."

Gah, dammit! :D

Buffy and Dawn's moment of bonding was lovely. It's good they had this talk and Dawn now knows about Buffy's predicament.

OMG, that mind control thing gives me the chills! Here's hoping Spike doesn't succumb to it, too.

tennyo_elf December 8 2011, 20:50:32 UTC

So close! I wish I was better at smut, then I could have written this story to be a tad bit longer. :)

Dawn and Buffy's relationship deserved more from me really, but I'm happy that this scene worked. They are lovely sisters.

Oh, thank you! I'm really happy that the mind control is really freaky! You might like next chapter, when things get really crazy! <3