I was so happy to see update. Yay!!!!!!!!!! Oh typical Buffy trying to be all noble and then uttering failing in the face of actually meeting him. I loved the conversation between Spike (or I suppose I should say William) and Dowling. Looking forward to more whenever you get around to it.
Awww amnesic Spike is awfully cute here. While I think Buffy is acting more out of cowardice than of respect for his possible second chance, but there's still hope for her, I hope she comes clean before he figures out he knows her.
Newly alive William's struggle with his accent is interesting and, at the same time, incredibly endearing. I can only imagine how confused he is.
Buffy's insecurities are in full force, and then some! I really can't say I agree with her decision to not read the letter and go see Spike. And then when they met, she introduced herself as someone else? So not good... What will Spike think, when the truth comes out! Oh well, at least on some level she already realises, she's not handling this well.
Thank you! The second chapter came easy, and third is getting starting...but slower. :/
I was worried the scene was too much like FFL, but I couldn't think of any betrayal that seemed right between Henry and William. In my head, when I wrote Henry originally it was suppose to be an unintentional betrayal. Well, Henry was being a jerk and wanted to apologize later, but was too prideful to ever do so and William was too hurt/angry to ever approach Henry again.
Yup, Spike/William is really confused. It's only going to get worse! =p
I don't agree with Buffy either! She's totally being a bad girl when it comes to him.
I like being evil? :B
Thank you again for reading! I hope you'll like the next one...whenever it gets posted!
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Oh typical Buffy trying to be all noble and then uttering failing in the face of actually meeting him. I loved the conversation between Spike (or I suppose I should say William) and Dowling.
Looking forward to more whenever you get around to it.
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Buffy is a bit all over the place, which having her flail about is going to be fun to write. I wonder what she'll do next?
Robert will be pop up again soon, so hopefully more bromance between Spike (William, kinda both but neither at the moment) and Dowling!
Thank you so much for your patience! *huggles
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Yeah, Buffy is really making mistakes here. She loves him, but she still isn't thinking right when it comes to him. Hopefully it'll work out?
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Poor lonely Victorian William. :(
*has strong urge to kick Henry's ass*
Newly alive William's struggle with his accent is interesting and, at the same time, incredibly endearing. I can only imagine how confused he is.
Buffy's insecurities are in full force, and then some! I really can't say I agree with her decision to not read the letter and go see Spike. And then when they met, she introduced herself as someone else? So not good... What will Spike think, when the truth comes out! Oh well, at least on some level she already realises, she's not handling this well.
Also, Buffy's little fantasy was evil! :D
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I was worried the scene was too much like FFL, but I couldn't think of any betrayal that seemed right between Henry and William. In my head, when I wrote Henry originally it was suppose to be an unintentional betrayal. Well, Henry was being a jerk and wanted to apologize later, but was too prideful to ever do so and William was too hurt/angry to ever approach Henry again.
Yup, Spike/William is really confused. It's only going to get worse! =p
I don't agree with Buffy either! She's totally being a bad girl when it comes to him.
I like being evil? :B
Thank you again for reading! I hope you'll like the next one...whenever it gets posted!
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