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THE DOOM: Northward Bound Part 3 for Sagely_Sea!

Apr 03, 2016 22:33

Title: THE DOOM: Northward Bound Part 3
Author: Mathias
Recipient: sagely_sea
Pairing/Characters: Tezuka, Atobe, Niou, Oshitari … + others
Rating: R
Warnings: … None?
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Summary: Tezuka is trying to go on a quest, but keeps getting delayed by people wanting to get in his pants As Atobe invades Rikkai, General Tezuka from Seigaku ( Read more... )

niou, !fic, tezuka, oshitari y, rikkai, !r, sanada, atobe

Comments 8

quelleperedhil April 3 2016, 14:15:04 UTC

THE DOOM: The World Will Be Jimi.

I love you and I hate you. But this was an absolutely BEAUTIFUL read. Fantastic job, anon. You totally absorbed me into your lovely, poetic world!

Fff, Yuushi. You would be working for the jimmies. Somehow.

inappropuri April 6 2016, 03:18:05 UTC

And the world will be beautiful when it is Jimi. Good job Yuushi. You can go hide in the fort after they have taken over the world.... Taking over Higa next lol.

Thank you Sara! I'm glad you enjoyed it ;;

perkyandproud April 4 2016, 05:28:52 UTC

Wow. Amazing story...so much detail and emotion and stuff....and that ending!! Oh, my word! LOL! Doom indeed! :)

inappropuri April 6 2016, 03:18:50 UTC

Thank you for reading!

Yes, the DOOM coming North ahahaha. Spreading the Jimi love.

sagely_sea April 4 2016, 14:03:51 UTC

Well... I suppose it was a happy ending... maybe... sort of.

It certainly was for the Jimmies at least.

I still can't believe you killed Shishido. >F

I love Sanada and Tezuka's brotherly love friendship. And Niou with his fox messengers. Poor chubby fox. He doesn't need a diet. It's just his winter coat, okay?!

And Atobe... oh obsessed Atobe.

I do want to know how Niou and Atobe ended up being quite intimate even before Tezuka showed up. What an interesting encounter that must have been.

And of course Tezuka. <3 So stoic and duty bound yet so swept away by others around him despite his best effort. I suppose it's hard to ignore two handsome and powerful magic users hen they set their eyes on you.

inappropuri April 6 2016, 03:21:36 UTC

It was 100% a happy ending.

I thought about switching him for Gakuto.... But nah. I am so sorry not sorry lol.

Bon-chan is chubby in all his incarnations ;; it's definitely winter coat puff. Now with Atobe contained he should lose some....

Tezuka works very hard. But his job is so much easier when Atobe and Niou are bonding already without him.

Thank you for reading Crys! It was quite intimidating writing for you!

monarchist April 4 2016, 19:54:56 UTC

You know, I thought something was off about Yanagi at the beginning, but I couldn't quite place what it was.

Clearly the thing I'm most curious about is how did the Jimmies manage to snare Yuushi. (Second is what happened between Niou & Atobe before Tezuka found them.) (Third, what innate magic does Tezuka possess? Besides being a dreadfully sexy megane.)

I love that Niou used foxes as messengers. Something tells me he named each one and the chubby fox is his favorite. I also like that Yagyuu used birds as messengers. ...then let the foxes eat them. Such friendship, I swear.

Oh, Atobe, trying to go through Rikkai to get to Seigaku, I mean Tezuka. Nice try, but no. You're so easy to read.

Tezuka was wonderful. I liked that he couldn't even keep himself in check and beheaded Shishido. (Sorry, Crys.)

I loved this world. (And goddamn it, I'm always fucking distracted by Rikkai.) Lovely fic, anon. ♥ ♥ ♥

inappropuri April 6 2016, 06:52:45 UTC

HAHA, so many questions <3 The Jimmies can ensnare anyone with their awesome and pure love :')

Niou has 100% definitely named all his foxes and totally doesn't have favourites this is a lie :X Yagyuu doesn't love his birds orz

Thank you for reading and enjoying it, Amberly. I do have a little bit left to tell (more about Jimmies expanding lol) but we'll see :)