(FIC) A Strange Kind of Combination for whisper132 By axtar

Jun 27, 2007 11:46

Author: axtar
For: whisper132
Title: A Strange Kind of Combination
Characters: Niou Masaharu, Marui Bunta
Rating: PG-13
Summary: As Rikkai goes head to head with Nagoyaseitoku on the tennis court, Niou remembers the first time he played doubles. (Spoilers for Genius 321 onwards where it concerns Rikkai.)
Warnings: Minimal swearing on Niou’s part.
Disclaimer:I ( Read more... )

fic, rikkai-centric

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ex_whisper13623 June 28 2007, 03:37:59 UTC
Dear Anonymous Person,

I think I love you. Lots. Lots and lots. A world's worth of love and a few orbiting bodies' worth as well.

The subtext...and Marui being so wonderfully proud and boyish, and Niou having actual character for once instead of simply being a flat, snide character.

♥ I absolutely ♥ you. ♥ And this. I ♥ this fic. ♥

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axtar July 5 2007, 13:02:03 UTC
*heaves a huge sigh of relief* I'm so glad you liked it! ^______^ I worried over this for quite a bit and wondered if I was missing the prompt, etc, so on and so forth...So when your comment popped up, I had a big, goofy grin hovering around my face for a good hour or so.

Again, happy tenifriends (day? event?)~! =D

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ex_whisper13623 July 5 2007, 13:03:49 UTC
Happy Tenitime! *hugs again* It really was fabulous.

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axtar July 5 2007, 13:08:17 UTC
*hugs you back* ♥ Am still really, really happy you enjoyed reading it~! =D

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yuncyn June 28 2007, 05:30:14 UTC
*books a comment place because currently has class and needs to go and has not finished BUT will COME BACK AND COMMENT. Because fic is GOOD ♥, just as whisper132 has said*

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yuncyn June 28 2007, 08:49:06 UTC
Ok, back!

Niou knows otherwise, but he’s not telling.

So much said in so few words - utterly brilliant. I never really thought of Niou and Marui as a combination but dang if you don't make it work! Niou's POV on the dissolving of the pair caught me, specially after I thought he was a bit of a jerk but this part I love best:

He grimaces at Niou-in-the-window; Niou laughs, silently as his head gets obscured in the red of a signboard outside as the bus stops at an intersection.

You don’t look good with red hair, he mouths, grinning.

Niou’s eyes flickers outside at the stop sign. Puri.

I ain't no Niou or Marui fangirl but this was _gorgeous_. ♥

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axtar July 5 2007, 13:05:21 UTC
*laughs* Hehe, glad you liked it!

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futomimii June 28 2007, 12:22:01 UTC
Why hello there Anonymous-kun, you just made my love for Niou and Marui's friendship surge to another level. GOOD FIC. :D ♥ I really liked how you characterized Marui. :DDD

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axtar July 5 2007, 13:03:03 UTC
*laughs* You caught on to me so fast! I guess my writing style is either too consistent, or really just that recognizable. XDDD

Thanks for reading though~ =p

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