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[venivincere]

Title: The Last Word
Characters: Atobe and the Hyoutei regulars
Rating: G
Summary: Hyoutei goes on vacation before the Nationals start.
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: Tennis no Oujisama © Konomi Takeshi, et al.
A/N: I hope you like this - there isn't that much summery fun, but there is comradeship.

Comments

[venivincere]

"If it's the truth, never be afraid to say it."

I cracked up when I read this line because it's funny, but also because it is soooooo Atobe. You did a good job with characterization in this fic and it's a lovely study into their friendship together that doesn't get explored in canon. I really liked this peek into their lives. Nice work!

[lilacfield]

Atobe, if nothing else, is fun to write. I wanted to write something where the Hyouteians are snarky in a rather playful way, and hence, this fic.
Thank you!

[medieval128]

Oh, god. :D :D :D You know, I really think you pulled this off really, really well.

Even though not much action happened, friendship happened, and I think when you can spin a story that tells a tale of its own without event after even after event, that is talent. I whole-heartedly applaud you, anon-san. ^^

And oh, my god. This paragraph - “The local food was an intriguing lesson…denim cutoffs.” - was so perfect. I couldn’t have seen it more vividly because all the things they did were so them and the characterization was just absolutely flawless. All the way through. The way you write the team is exactly the way I see and write them myself.

Thank you very much for writing this. :) It totally brightened my day reading it. All in all, a lovely job. <3

[lilacfield]

I wanted to focus on the Hyoutei boys as characters, and did so by transferring them into a different setting. Guess the rest took care of itself? ^^ I really enjoyed writing this.

Thank you :)