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othermewriter February 18 2012, 18:53:23 UTC
Aww poor Doctor! So confused but even then still doing the right thing for his wife & family. Love Sammy's precognitive burst and the hope that it is a just some type of temporary amnesia thing and it's just the Doctor's memory that has gone wonky not reality. Or possibly that he will do something to deliberately swaps places so that he can stop the cloud thing before it ever gets to Earth and ruins everything for him.

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fishface44 February 19 2012, 01:43:14 UTC
This is such and excellent chapter! I love these kids, and I am afraid you plan to break my heart a little!

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julesndairyland February 19 2012, 17:08:36 UTC
foreshadowing! arguing! kissing! pizza!

practically perfect.

but srsly, great story, enjoyed getting caught up with it. i look forward to seeing more back story ans more kissing.

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glory_jean February 20 2012, 07:21:34 UTC
Aww. I love this story.

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monkeyprincess7 February 28 2012, 05:12:30 UTC
SAMMY!! I love that little girl already, so intuitive and just adorable. Wilf is awesome too, but Sammy is just my girl you know *chest bump*

I'm trying to remember a movie, or was it a TV episode where something like this happened, but for the life of me, I can't remember the name :/ But I love how you're taking it, tin bits at a time, just enough for him to get confused all over again before thorwing him happy moments to cherish.

Yay!

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