The Family Man, Chapter 1

[tenandi]

Comments

[othermewriter]

Oh our poor Doctor is in a quandary isn't he. Love how he psychically put Will in time out and the vocabulary on those kids, nothing less then what I would expect from his precocious little ones. The dog names are a riot and I am so glad that his daughter realizes something wrong if no one else can she will be able to help explain to Rose that there really is something amiss.

[julesndairyland]

I am so intrigued with this. I am completely unfamiliar with the movie you talk about, prolly will GTS. Your befuddled Doctor is amazing and adorkable. I love the details of seeing the world through the Doctors eyes. Really insightful. I look forward to reading more!

[tenandi]

Yes you've got to see the movie. It's a tearjerker, but it's so sweet. Thanks a lot!

[kilodalton]

What an awesome concept! I mean ... all your concepts are awesome, but this is especially cool!

[kandy57]

Wow! I'm hooked :). Can't wait for next chapter.

[tracy_lousia]

Wow, this is gonna turn out to be awesome. In fact is already is :) Love your writing and the confusion that the Doctor is feeling is very well played out. Looking forward to more.