Brilliant! That was defiantely at the top of my list for scenes where the Doctor and Rose are in prison/chained up together. You wrote that so beautifully I really got a clear image of them and oh my gosh the tension and the humor! I just loved it. The last line was so perfect!
Aw! Ta very much. Sometimes I think I love the tension more...
As a writer I find sex scenes are the most difficult to write. I don't want to sound (completely) like a harlequin novel with cheesy words and overly porny descriptions, but then again, I don't want to sound puritanical either.
I'll share with you my favorite (you've prolly read) blend of tension, passion and just enough smut to make it spicy: The Last Stop by Cassandra
In fact, it's my favorite Dr. Who fanfic of ALL TIME. *bows solemnly*
Oh yes! I remember that one. It's quite beautiful and really adds a whole new dimension to the Rose/TenII story. I haven't really written anything too descriptive regarding sex scenes. I've come close a few times but have not yet made the leap. I don't think I write graphic stuff worth a hoot and I'm not sure if I did, how comfortable I would feel having it online. It's a bit intimidating. I think you did a spot on job with everything I've read - especially the dream series.
I'm still chuckling over him fishing that bobby pin out of her brazier!
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As a writer I find sex scenes are the most difficult to write. I don't want to sound (completely) like a harlequin novel with cheesy words and overly porny descriptions, but then again, I don't want to sound puritanical either.
I'll share with you my favorite (you've prolly read) blend of tension, passion and just enough smut to make it spicy: The Last Stop by Cassandra
In fact, it's my favorite Dr. Who fanfic of ALL TIME. *bows solemnly*
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6343820/1/The_Last_Stop_Rose
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I'm still chuckling over him fishing that bobby pin out of her brazier!
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