Comments | tempus_viator: fanfic: there's no i in team

tempus_viator

fanfic: there's no i in team

Mar 22, 2011 12:51

Title: There's No I In Team
Author: Jocelyn
Fandom: Glee
Pairings: New Directions as a team. Quinn/Rachel. Santana/Brittany.
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: If only. They will never, ever be mine.
Prompt: We will never be never be anything but loud
And nitty gritty dirty little freaks
Won't you come on and come on and raise your glass
Summary: With a week before ( Read more... )

glee, fanfic, pairing: rachel/quinn, pairing: brittany/santana

Comments 9

meagan4dominic March 23 2011, 04:20:37 UTC

I love this fic! The ending was great, I love Puck trying to get in with Brittana and Faberry, so typical of him!

The opening scene is beautifully written, I feel like you really capture the essence of the group in it.

Kurt, Mercedes and Tina are lurking mischievously in the shadows when first the blonde and then the brunette walks into the auditorium. Kurt motions for them to hasten their pace and they lock the doors to prevent the two girls from exiting - this makes me yearn for Kurt to come back to McKinley, because it reminds me so much of how perfectly he fit in with Tina and Mercedes and all the fun they had. I love that you bought him back to McKinley and Finn saving him from being beaten up was awesome

Rachel even manages to share the spotlight slightly by gracefully giving up parts of the solos to other people (although some people suspect it’s more because Quinn told her too then her own willingness). - I love this! I'm only a new Faberry shipper (where have I been, right?) but I think they could really go together ( ... )

tempus_viator March 23 2011, 20:00:10 UTC

I wish Kurt would come back to McKinley too! I mean, Blaine and the Warblers are great and all with their acapellas but I miss him all the same. Actually, I think I read somewhere that Kurt was coming back in the next few episodes and that's why I threw it in.

meagan4dominic March 24 2011, 02:19:11 UTC

I really hope Kurt comes back, I really need him to. I agree, the Warblers are cool and I like how we've had an inside look at the competition, but Kurt belongs at McKinley with Mercedes!

radak March 23 2011, 04:25:47 UTC

very nice!

tempus_viator March 23 2011, 20:03:52 UTC

Thanks :)

malexfaith March 23 2011, 07:27:21 UTC

Awesome writing. Love how you captured all the characters perfectly. Very enjoyable. Thanks heaps for sharing

tempus_viator March 23 2011, 20:04:03 UTC

Thanks for the comment :D

lar_laughs March 24 2011, 00:04:05 UTC

Thank you so much! I love it! My favorite line is The two of them have always been together better then they are apart. So true! Rachel and Quinn really are better when they're together.

And Santana and Brittany! Love having them interact!

Thank you!

tempus_viator March 25 2011, 23:43:22 UTC

Thank you for letting me do something I love :D