fanfic: you were sent here (for the rescue) [2/5]

[tempus_viator]

Title: You Were Sent Here (For The Rescue) [2/5]
Author: Jocelyn
Fandom: Glee
Rating: PG 13
Pairings: Rachel/Quinn
Word Count: 3500
Warnings: Child abuse.
Spoilers: Nothing I can think of.
Disclaimer: Don't own.
Summary: Everyone needs a little saving sometimes.
A/N: I’m in a wonderful mood. Like so wonderful that I’m bouncing up and down on imaginary

Comments

[baconrex]

I love this chapter. Russel is an ass. I love how Rachel is determined to help Quinn. Santana and Brit were hilarious. And this made me laugh

“My ass is finger, right, San?”
I think you meant finer

[tempus_viator]

Ohman. Failed.

Thanks for pointing that out :)

[ayden07]

Aaaaahhh Rachel wants to save Quinn!! I have googly, teary eyes right now after reading this. This is shaping up so well (aside from Quinn getting abused). I just hope Russell doesnt severely hurt Quinn.

[volando_voy]

Yay, you posted it! I love love love the changes in the final section. The tension comes across so well. :D

Favorite bits:
The change to the 'acquiescence' line. It works so nicely now!
“I want to meet a unicorn. They’re rare and magical, sort of like Rachel’s voice.” - I literally LOL'd at this. It's such a Brittany thing to say.
"Detective Rachel"! The best part is I can picture her really getting into that role if provoked. It would be like a live version of Clue, only with PowerPoint slides.
Also, Finn and his fear of the bloodbath. If nothing else, that boy certainly knows how to escape a conflict.

[winstonta]

I really feel for both of these two in this terrible situation. I'm not surprised that Quinn's friends have no idea about the abuse; Quinn can barely admit it to herself, so why would she tell others? Especially since, in her opinion, the abuse is "her fault".

You've done a great job with this so far (especially for such a sensitive subject) and I cannot wait to see where you go with it from here.

[miss_darkmoon]

:D

:D :D :D :D

This is getting good! :D