fanfic: you were sent here (for the rescue) [1/5]

[tempus_viator]

Title: You Were Sent Here (For The Rescue) [1/5]
Author: Jocelyn (tempus_viator )
Fandom: Glee
Rating: PG 13
Pairings: Rachel/Quinn
Word Count: 1500
Warnings: Child abuse.
Spoilers: Nothing I can think of.
Disclaimer: I don't own Glee just the mistakes and I will eventually find myself a beta...
Summary: Everyone needs a little saving sometimes.
A/N: Hi guys! I am

Comments

[miss_darkmoon]

That was beautiful.

I'm really excited to see where you take this. Descriptions were great, my heart just ached for Quinn.... just, great.

[tempus_viator]

You're beautiful and great for reading this ;)

[nightcuddler]

Poor Quinn, I hope that Rachel will be able to help her open up and get the help she needs. Her parents should be in jail for this. But first Quinn needs to let Rachel in and help her.

[tempus_viator]

Agreed definitely but what child would ever want to put their own parents away? :(

Thanks for reading :D

[cellochick92]

Oh goodness, such a fantastic beginning =D Also, I would be happy to beta for you if you're still looking! Just let me know! Either way, I can't wait to see where you take this- abuse!fic with Rachel to the rescue is sort of like my crack =P

[tempus_viator]

Thanks for commenting and reading :D

Also, glad I can feed your addiction. ;)

[volando_voy]

Ooo. Something new. Awesome! And yes, I followed you over from fanfiction.net. Stalking, I believe it's called. XD

I like that you started the scene in what's obviously the middle of something much bigger. (The abuse, the fact that Russell is there at all, that Rachel and Quinn seem halfway friendly) Very interested to see how you unfold that in the later chapters.

One of my favorite things about your style is that you give things the emotional weight they need to really make an impact. The details of Quinn's injuries and the fact that her mother laughs at one point are striking and it's obvious that her situation is desperate. And the little moment of her being jumpy later is totally heartbreaking, because that's real. Mm, stress disorders...

Also, I will gladly beta if you like. I do actually know how, even if ff.net won't let me!

[tempus_viator]

Stalking is a wondrous form of flattery ;)

One of the best things I like writing about is emotions and just the little things without actual dialogue. If someone let me, whole stories would be just that and a good part of this beginning chapter was cut out because I thought I was backtracking and saying things over and over again and emphasizing everything too much, lol.

It would be awesome if you could :) Not that I've ever had a beta so I don't know how this goes o.O

Whoa. So was replying to this and refreshed the page and the bar up there ^ changed o.O

[volando_voy]

Oh, no. Emote away. I have such a hard time with long exposition... my creative writing training was mostly in poetry, so I'm all about the seemingly-insignificant details that pop out and make something mundane turn awesome. Writing can be weirdly like photography in that sense.

If you shoot me a PM and let me know what program you use to type your stuff, I'll give you my e-mail address. I don't think I can use Doc Exchange over on ff.net unless I make a miraculous 6,000 word post first.

[baconrex]

This was so good. (the fic not the situation)
I love the descriptions and I hope Rachel can help Quinn through this. Poor Quinn

[tempus_viator]

Hopefully Rachel will save Quinn :)

Thanks for reading ^_^