For the first time in my life, I actually enjoyed reading a vampire story. ^___^ That was beautiful~
I heart this line: "I pierced his throat with my fangs, and felt the rush of fire that is living blood as it washed over my tongue." It's really great imagery.
*grins and bows* I'm glad you enjoyed. I've gotten so sick of seeing the whole "Yami is a vampire that has an innocent human named Yugi" that I thought I'd do it the other way.
And it always seems to escape people that to something without heat, blood is hot. I've actually seen blood melt through snow.
Really, I love to write, and it's always great to get feedback.
OHS! so yugi is evil? XD i loved this, i loved your words and its details! a little rushed, but oh well, this is a timed challenge. i wonder how you guys become so good at AUs? i'm such a stickler for keeping it reasonably within the story, so AUs are nearly impossible for me.
i guess i'll try tonight. >___>
@icedark_elf: i love your shigure picture! XD YES! SHIGURE LOVE!
*grins* Shigure is pretty. I want to molest Shigure. *pets*
I think AUs get easier the more you read them, actually. I haven't written too many, but I enjoy taking things and putting them in someplace they've never been. Like my half done Lord of the Rings AU, set in a world where there are no hobbits or elves, just humans with different abilities.
It also helps to continue to doodle AUs. Even if you never finish it, every little bit of AU you can write down on a scrap piece of paper will help in the long run.
Plus, AUs are fun. *grins* And they are in line with the story. Just not the orginial one. *smirks*
Ahh, that was pretty~! *.* I usually don't like vampire AUs, but this one was good because Yugi kicked ass! Plus it was sooo pretty and detailed-like. Yay! <3<3
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I heart this line: "I pierced his throat with my fangs, and felt the rush of fire that is living blood as it washed over my tongue." It's really great imagery.
Amazing!!!
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And it always seems to escape people that to something without heat, blood is hot. I've actually seen blood melt through snow.
Really, I love to write, and it's always great to get feedback.
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i guess i'll try tonight. >___>
@icedark_elf: i love your shigure picture! XD YES! SHIGURE LOVE!
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I think AUs get easier the more you read them, actually. I haven't written too many, but I enjoy taking things and putting them in someplace they've never been. Like my half done Lord of the Rings AU, set in a world where there are no hobbits or elves, just humans with different abilities.
It also helps to continue to doodle AUs. Even if you never finish it, every little bit of AU you can write down on a scrap piece of paper will help in the long run.
Plus, AUs are fun. *grins* And they are in line with the story. Just not the orginial one. *smirks*
Glad you enjoyed this.
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