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Godsend, Yuugiou, Yami/Yuugi, R

May 03, 2004 12:02

Title: Godsend
Author: postingwhore
Fandom: Yuugiou
Type: Yaoi
Pairing: Yami/Yuugi
Summary: He made you a promise of forever, but you should have known better.
Rating: R
Genre: General
Disclaimer: I am woman. He is man. I own nothing.
Notes: For temps_mort's postscript challenge in 26 minutes. Takes place after end of manga, so there are vague spoilers in ( Read more... )

author: postingwhore, [animanga] yu-gi-oh!, *type: m/m

Comments 4

teethlikedog May 6 2004, 14:48:43 UTC

Mrrrow... That is hawt! Sexy and gorgeous and angsty all at once, and I absolutely adore the ending. Delicious! :9

postingwhore May 6 2004, 15:37:51 UTC

Thank you for your kind praise!

ceresi June 12 2004, 11:38:13 UTC

So, I am like, so late in giving feedback to this that I should maybe go hang myself or something else dramatic. *guilt*

But I love it a lot a lot a lot, because it is very sexy and fluid and ouch. My favorite parts:

his sharp crimson eyes that were almost predatory in the way they stared at you, his lean smooth body standing with the air of some sort of royalty and covered in sleek shining leather that whispered to you of secrets and promises, and when you heard him speak for the first time, you thought that he had to be some sort of god.

You weren't exactly wrong.

Me: MEEP!

Lovelovelove the predatory bit and 'his lean smooth body' because YUM! and then there's the sleek and shining leather and the secrets and promises and YUM! And the god bit, which is so ironic and bitter.

Then there's the next bit: He kissed you, and it was so soft and tender that you almost wanted to cry because you didn't think it would be like this. *cries* Perfectly painful and sweet and then the sex! YUM ( ... )

postingwhore June 12 2004, 16:54:21 UTC

XD, yes. I think this is one of my best fics evar. Yay. :D