BTW: I don't normally point stuff like this out, but your second paragraph has a number of typos in this section:
Despite this and Will’s own frustartions, Will remains intensely loyal to the man who rescued him from the orphanege. Thjis made me think a lot about where loyalty comes from, and the impact that kindenss can have on others.
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BTW: I don't normally point stuff like this out, but your second paragraph has a number of typos in this section:
Despite this and Will’s own frustartions, Will remains intensely loyal to the man who rescued him from the orphanege. Thjis made me think a lot about where loyalty comes from, and the impact that kindenss can have on others.
I suspect you were tired when you wrote this. :)
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