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alex_kingston September 29 2011, 10:20:00 UTC
Good job! Loved it!

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templemarker October 2 2011, 20:34:30 UTC
Thank you!

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sweetjamielee September 29 2011, 15:08:28 UTC
Love the tension, attraction, vulnerability, and friendship in this. <3

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templemarker October 2 2011, 20:34:57 UTC
Thank you so much!

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zinnia_rose September 29 2011, 21:07:24 UTC
Oooh. I love this. The last two lines are PERFECTION.

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templemarker October 2 2011, 20:35:41 UTC
Thank you so much!

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rhyfeddu September 30 2011, 02:07:05 UTC

Great use of Alicia's (alcohol soaked) brain there. :) Got her voice - all the ambivalence, sorrow and anger - down.

"You're not a one-night anything,"

....Kalinda rarely carried a bag, as if she expected to get into a street fight at any moment and need the full range of motion.

Perfection. If I had pancakes on me, I'd hand them over now. Write more!

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templemarker October 2 2011, 20:35:56 UTC
Thank you so much!

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sterling_sky October 1 2011, 02:54:06 UTC
"You're not a one-night anything," up to "God, she really was significantly drunk." is especially fabulous. I love this entire thing though, SO MUCH, augggghhhh! I would gladly make you many pancakes for this fic. :D

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templemarker October 2 2011, 20:36:33 UTC
Thank you! So pleased you enjoyed it.

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