Comments | templemarker: Tripping the Line by templemarker [Suits, Harvey/Mike, PG-13]

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Tripping the Line by templemarker [Suits, Harvey/Mike, PG-13]

Sep 15, 2011 21:59

Tripping the Line
by templemarker

Notes: BINGO! For the "authority figures" square of my 2011

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kink bingo, harvey/mike, suits, will write for pancakes

Comments 16

alethialia September 16 2011, 05:59:15 UTC

You have no idea the sound of incoherent glee I made when this appeared. It was plain undignified.

"Go talk to these kids so we can get the hell out of Ohio."

AHAHAHA! God forbid they stay there any longer than absolutely necessary.

"Guys, uh, this is Harvey. My--my assistant."

Oh, the retribution. It shall be EPIC.

"If this is what I get for usurping your authority," he said, "now I know what to do when I want your attention."

::stares:: Yeah, not so much with the negative reinforcement, but then, probably not what Harvey was going for.

AWESOME.

templemarker September 20 2011, 03:32:46 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! <3

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templemarker September 20 2011, 03:32:50 UTC

Thank you!

jellytea September 16 2011, 16:26:57 UTC

UM. When I finish actually reading this, I'll make a coherent comment BUT BUT

was resigned to trying to make shit up about how amazing and rewarding law school was for the fraternity's president, Evan

and then the mention of the school being in OHIO. I lurve you! I got so many happy feelings. And then I got weepy all over again because...no Greek!

jellytea September 16 2011, 16:31:02 UTC

This fic is just...DELICIOUS. Umf. All that sexual tension between Harvey and Mike.

"You should always be clear who's in charge here," Harvey said, and tilted his head to slant his mouth over Mike's, a closed kiss at first until Mike let the surprise and pleasure and want come out in a guttural noise and Harvey deepened it with an exhale of breath.

HOMG. So hot. I love aggressive!Harvey.

templemarker September 20 2011, 05:03:36 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you caught that reference--I figured it was a backdoor crossover some folks would get, which is fun for me as a writer.

So pleased you enjoyed the story!

liketheroad September 16 2011, 20:08:09 UTC

Aahaha, the thought of Harvey is OHIO delights me to no end. As did the rest of this fic!

templemarker September 20 2011, 03:40:00 UTC

Thank you so much!

lil_miss_maddie September 16 2011, 22:38:05 UTC

Fabulous!

"If this is what I get for usurping your authority," he said, "now I know what to do when I want your attention."

*fans self*

templemarker September 20 2011, 03:40:06 UTC

Thank you!