Combination of States by templemarker [Generation Kill, Brad/Nate, NC17, 1/2]

[templemarker]

Part one.

Comments

[templemarker]

Thank you very much! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it.

[mcl4r3n]

\o/ This was so satisfying! I loved all of the little details you included, like Brad's father teaching Nate to make ribs.

[templemarker]

Thank you very much!

[bgaleb]

I loved all your previous stories and this one is just as beautiful and heartwarming. I think about it as RealLife!AU. Because if it happened in RL thats the way it would be. Thank you very much for writing and sharing!

[templemarker]

Oh, thank you very much. RealLife!AU is very apt--that's what I was going for. I'm glad it worked for you!

[glitterglam13]

I absolutely loved this. The dynamics of their relationship specially and the way you used all the rest of the characters and the setting to give such a fleshed out feel to their life together.

[templemarker]

Thank you so much! I'm pleased you liked it.

[alasse]

I loved this. I loved how you portrayed both of them, and how comfortable and right their relationship felt -- the connection they had in OIF effortlessly and beautifully grown into this amazing thing, where Nate's been there, waiting and Brad's finally caught up. Brad struggling with whether to retire or re-enlist was perfect, too. And, god, RAY. You captured him PERFECTLY. Just amazing -- thank you so much for sharing.

[templemarker]

Ah, thank you for the lovely feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it.