This Time Around: Chapter 6

[tempest819]

Title: This Time Around
Author: Tempest
Fandom: Guiding Light/Otalia
Pairing: Olivia/Natalia
Rating: PG-13(At present)

Summary: Starts with the return of Olivia from San Francisco after the spa trip. How will Natalia and Olivia move foward with so many obstacles in their path?

Disclaimers: The characters of Natalia Rivera and Olivia Spencer and

Comments

[wkgreen]

Now why couldn't Guiding Light have done that! Excellent story and presentation of Olivia and Natalia's relationship! And presenting concerns that are going to come up with them. Keep up the good work.

[tempest819]

Thanks, I'll do my best. Only one chapter left so I hope I don't disappoint.

[jennjenn30]

If only I had accurate words for just how moving and so very real you made this chapter seem. This just makes one want to reach out and embrace love with all that they have in them. This was beautifully done and by far my favorite chapter. I look forward to the next chapter.

[tempest819]

Wow, I'm truly humbled if that's how you felt after reading this chapter. The Otalia storyline and its message of love is quite powerful.

[perpetualblyss]

Really evocative writing. My only wish is that you wrote faster. But be assured that with this quality of writing I will read whenever you update.

[tempest819]

Lol! I know, I know, I make molasses look peppy in comparison. I try, I really do. Life has a way of getting in the way ;-) I'm happy to hear that you'll still be there though, when it finally gets out of the way. Thanks for the kind words.

[zephyr_tempest]

Every time! Every single time you post another chapter you leave me this gibbering idiot with a smile as wide as the mississippi on my face. Your story is written so that it doesn't just speak to the emotions of the characters, it transplants what they're feeling into the reader and right now I'm pretty sure I'm one teaspoon of sugar away from a diabetic coma. The best bit? It's not all total sugary sap, it's real. The characters are real with insecurities and personalities and dilemmas in their lives. They have challenges to over come and everything is so much sweeter somehow because of that. You don't have everyone jumping on the rainbow coloured wagon, but you don't have them stoning it either

[tempest819]

Every time, every single time you make me blush with your kind words

[zephyr_tempest]

It's the aim of the game m'dear. My goal in life is to be so utterly adoring that you feel obliged to write more and keep me so utterly adoring. XD

I understand completely. I plot out little scenarios in my head occasionally too. ;) CC and JL are just...there are no words, their acting is that phenomenal.

OHHH! SEQUEL!!!! You just totally made my day. 'Specially now that I know Doris is gonna play more of a part in the next one.

I'm overflowing, promise. Angst and I are good friends. I put my characters through hell, really. XD My fingers have something against them.

[2theoceanblue]

I so love this story, it's so true to the characters and explores issues they would have. I just don't get why Guiding Light couldn't have done something along these lines. Really good work - looking forward to the next chapter. Hmmm, think I shall re-read again!

[tempest819]

Ahhh, a new recruit! Happy to have you aboard! Thank you for dropping in to offer your thoughts. It means a lot. Writing is its own reward, but hearing that other people enjoy makes it all the more gratifying and motivates me to keep going. Many thanks!