Comments | tellytubby101: X-Men: First Class Fanfiction: stray the other way why don't you

tellytubby101

X-Men: First Class Fanfiction: stray the other way why don't you

Jul 06, 2011 01:55

stray the other way why don’t you

Summary: The bullet doesn’t hit Charles. But it does hit Raven. GEN. One shot.
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x-men: first class, fanfiction

Comments 15

not_from_stars July 5 2011, 16:46:13 UTC

Oh. Oh wow. This was amazing and heartbreaking and beautiful.

tellytubby101 July 6 2011, 01:50:54 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

deernathasha July 5 2011, 17:02:24 UTC

Very moving. :'(

tellytubby101 July 6 2011, 01:51:30 UTC

Thank you! ^^

yahtzee63 July 5 2011, 17:10:40 UTC

Oooh, loved this. It's one of the few things that could have made Charles radically shift course.

tellytubby101 July 6 2011, 01:53:53 UTC

I've read a few AUs of the beach scene and I wondered why I hadn't seen Raven being killed off yet. If I had continued this, I think Charles would be doen as rather less trusting and hopeful, but still not as bloodthirsty as Erik.

Anyway, I'm getting of track. Thank you for coimmenting! ♥

vikingprincess July 5 2011, 19:19:13 UTC

This is gorgeous and heartbreaking - well done!

tellytubby101 July 6 2011, 01:54:20 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! :D

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tellytubby101 July 6 2011, 11:57:19 UTC

Your icon is rather distracting. *_*

And thank you! ♥ :)