When He's Not There

[tellshannon815]

Title: When He's Not There
Characters: Sayid, Nadia, Omer.
Pairings: Sayid/Nadia, Omer/Nadia.
Rating: PG
Warnings: Spoilers for Sundown and He's Our You.
Summary: Written for lost_in_108 prompt #23; entangled. It's easier for them all when Sayid's not there, because they don't have to confront their tangled past.

Comments

[tokenblkgirl]

I love that you wrote for these characters, this was wonderful. There's not enough fic about them. :)

[tellshannon815]

Thank you! I totally agree, there's nowhere near enough!

[jaydblu]

Very nice...and sad for them all. Well done.

[tellshannon815]

Thank you, glad you liked this!

[valhalla37]

Oh Sayid -- this is so lovely, but so achingly sad. Great stuff!

[tellshannon815]

Thank you! This is how I imagine it must have been for them all.

[ozmissage]

Oh man, this is just perfect.

I love how you show this situation from all sides. It's so messy and sad for everyone involved, wonderful job.

[tellshannon815]

I really don't get why Sayid thought pushing Nadia towards Omer would solve anything, because all he did was make matters worse! He really created a mess, didn't he?

[flaky_artist]

This is lovely. I really like the way you formatted it, with all three point of views. It's so sad that this family has to live with all that tension beneath the surface. Great job!

[tellshannon815]

Thank you! Sayid really wasn't thinking when he created this situation, was he?