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tellshannon815

The Beginning of the End of Us

Nov 25, 2009 23:34

Title: The Beginning of the End of Us
Characters: Eloise, Charles, Richard.
Pairing: Charles/Eloise
Warnings: Spoilers for The Incident.
Rating: PG
Summary: Written for lost_in_108 prompt #10: grateful. Charles is grateful that Richard stopped Eloise helping with Jack's plan; Eloise isn't.

( And if Charles was grateful for that, then he didn't understand her at all )

lost: charles widmore, lost: eloise hawking, lost: richard alpert

Comments 11

siluria November 26 2009, 22:27:37 UTC

Oooh - nicely done! I love that last sentence!

tellshannon815 November 27 2009, 22:37:18 UTC

Thank you! I can totally imagine this as having happened.

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tellshannon815 November 27 2009, 22:39:40 UTC

Thank you! I always like to see more about them.

op_de_radio November 30 2009, 08:39:38 UTC

I loved this.

Eloise is definitely one of my favorite character. :D

tellshannon815 November 30 2009, 22:18:00 UTC

Thank you! I love Eloise too.

valhalla37 December 1 2009, 01:07:00 UTC

Wow, this is really fantastic! Great job!

tellshannon815 December 2 2009, 23:50:11 UTC

Thank you! Pleased you liked this. More Eloise fic coming soon!

ozmissage December 1 2009, 21:35:16 UTC

This is such a wonderful use of the prompt, that last line was perfect.

tellshannon815 December 2 2009, 23:39:59 UTC

Thank you, glad you liked!