Fate's Calling

Oct 24, 2009 17:17

Title: Fate's Calling
Characters: Ana Lucia.
Rating: PG
Spoilers: only if you haven't seen all Ana's episodes
Summary: For lost_in_108 prompt #5, liquor. Ana Lucia realises she can no longer bear the taste of tequila and tonic.

It reminds her of mistakes, tastes of failure )

lost: ana lucia cortez

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firelakie October 24 2009, 18:51:03 UTC
Wow. Really loved this. Great job.

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tellshannon815 October 25 2009, 19:20:15 UTC
Thank you, glad you liked this!

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jeaniris October 24 2009, 19:22:44 UTC
Love Ana Lucia and this is a great look at her.

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tellshannon815 October 25 2009, 19:21:47 UTC
Thank you! I never got all the Ana hate, so it's always nice to meet someone who loves her!

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tellshannon815 October 25 2009, 19:35:21 UTC
Huh, thought I'd replied to this but it seems to have disappeared, apologies if you get this twice! Glad you liked, always good to meet someone who likes Ana!

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ozmissage October 24 2009, 19:27:09 UTC
Oh, Ana. This is such a lovely, sharp look at her. That last line in particular was perfect. Wonderful job!

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tellshannon815 October 25 2009, 19:23:28 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked this - last line was probably my favourite bit of it too.

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siluria October 24 2009, 19:35:31 UTC
I like this, the bitter taste of tequila and what it's linked to for Ana works well!

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tellshannon815 October 25 2009, 19:24:43 UTC
Thank you, glad you think it worked!

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missy_useless October 24 2009, 22:07:08 UTC
I love Ana so much. *sigh* Great drabble/ficlet.

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tellshannon815 October 25 2009, 19:26:07 UTC
Thank you! She gets so much hate, it's always nice to see someone who likes her!

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