Comments | telesilla: FIC: Symmetry (Lotrips, Orlando/Bean, Viggo, NC-17))

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FIC: Symmetry (Lotrips, Orlando/Bean, Viggo, NC-17))

May 31, 2006 23:54

Symmetry
Author: telesilla
Fandom/Pairing: Lotrips, Orlando/Bean, Viggo
Rating/Warnings: NC-17
Summary: Orlando is daring and Bean is cautious, except when they aren't.
Word Count: 504
Disclaimer: Not RL; didn't happen. If you think this has anything to do with the real actors involved, then you need to put down the crack pipe.

Notes: Written for msilverstar who ( Read more... )

orlando, bean, lotrips, viggo

Comments 24

ravenna_c_tan June 1 2006, 07:35:17 UTC

Oh, that comes together nicely, don't it?

(no pun intended)

telesilla June 4 2006, 04:40:33 UTC

Hee! Thanks! I like to do that kind of mirroring thing now and then and what we know of these two guys lends itself to that sort of thing.

green_grrl June 1 2006, 09:51:37 UTC

It's lovely and evocative and hot, but oh that last line is a kicker! Hee!

telesilla June 4 2006, 04:43:27 UTC

Thank you! It was one of those times when I looked at it and realized it didn't exactly end. Then Sean insisted on driving and it fell into place.

doylebaby June 1 2006, 10:22:29 UTC

I LOVE that last line! It's so Sean.

telesilla June 4 2006, 04:44:22 UTC

Thanks! I like to think of him as being the sensible one. Most of the time. :)

half_elf_lost June 1 2006, 13:54:48 UTC

"Oh hell yeah," Orlando says, as he licks his lips.

"As long as I'm the one driving," Sean says.

Oh yeah, Sean's driving. *BIG snort*

This was great. Nice and simple (cleanly written) and it ties up smoothly.

telesilla June 4 2006, 04:45:49 UTC

Thank you! "Cleanly written" is a major compliment and I really appreciate it. And yeah, you just know that Sean not only drives but "drives." ;)

half_elf_lost June 4 2006, 05:18:59 UTC

Glad you understand! Clean sometimes sounds underwhelming to some people, but I SWEAR it means you not only crafted the story, but you were willing to pare it down and get rid of the excess. It's tough to do!

I beta for a writer who's good, but admits to falling in love with their own words and can't get rid of what I suggest (as you could guess, most of my edits are removals, not additions).

telesilla June 4 2006, 05:52:18 UTC

I used to be much more verbose, but over the last--*boggles*--11 years, I've managed to streamline my style somewhat. I totally understand falling in love with one's own words though; I really have to be careful with descriptions of exotic locations, for example.

Thread 5

causette June 1 2006, 15:55:20 UTC

Sean is the one who doesn't seem to care if they get caught when he turns Orlando around and fucks him, right there in the alleyway.

Nnnnnngggghhhhh *fans self* I love it when Sean gets a little rough with Orlando! Rawrrrrrr!!

telesilla June 4 2006, 04:49:00 UTC

Yes, the idea of Sean pushing Orli into an alley wall and having his wicked way with him is pretty drool worthy. ;)