Comments | teerqesskq: Star-Crossed Ch. 13

teerqesskq

Star-Crossed Ch. 13

Oct 15, 2011 00:24

Author: Me
Pairing: Leah/Bella
Rating: PG-13 (this chapter)
Warnings: None
Summary: After the death of her father, Leah couldn't figure out how anything could get worse, but it does. It seems that just when she's starting to understanding who she is, an event turns her whole life upside down. Nothing, she believes, is ever going to go her way. Her ( Read more... )

fanfic, leah/bella, twilight, leah clearwater, femslash, bella swan, fic: star-crossed, swanwater

Comments 11

gabbie217 October 15 2011, 08:03:41 UTC

*throws fit ( ... )

teerqesskq October 15 2011, 08:24:45 UTC

lol lol lol. I know. I was thinking of making them kiss, but then I was like NO! I've already got them in and I can drag it on for a little bit more. I want you to be like FINALLY! and celebrate and everything. Like when your otp become canon type of thing (idk how that feels like tho ): I'm sorry for taking so long. I can blame college, but it mostly has to do with me being a lazy bum. I used to ship Alice and Bella, so maybe it's just a little jealousy Alice has :P and that her and Edward are close (or so I've read on wiki). The story isn't even close to ending, woman! We've got a long way to go. Let all your feelings out. You've waiting long enough.

anonymous October 19 2011, 08:48:23 UTC

I love this story! I check all the time to see if you have updated.

teerqesskq October 19 2011, 23:28:11 UTC

awww thank you. :)

Good God lovelylatina518 October 28 2011, 08:18:17 UTC

I stayed up WAYYYYY past my "bedtime" reading this entire fic... Yeah... I am seriously digging it. Your writing is amazing, so much better than the crap I read on FF(dot)net. I am so following you now... Frak I can't believe I read it all in one sitting... And I have to be at work in 6 hours... Oye...

Re: Good God teerqesskq October 28 2011, 21:38:02 UTC

aw thanks! I don't like ff because it's too confusing for me. I rather just type it up and post like here on lj. aw. I hope you got to work okay!

Re: Good God lovelylatina518 October 30 2011, 22:47:59 UTC

Man, I went to work thinking about your story and cracking up everytime I thought about the scene of Eddie trying to read Rose's mind and her thinking violent thoughts then of Emmet naked, I totally pictured Eddie cringing like Mr. Burns, lol. And again, you have some talent boiling there, the writing and dialogue is very believable, and usually I'll find SOME continuity issue (I'm an asshole like that) but I don't think I noticed a single one in yours. Brava for that. ;)

Re: Good God teerqesskq October 31 2011, 01:03:35 UTC

hahaha. thanks. Awww that means a lot. I'm afraid I might have continuity issues. I know I have spelling mistakes, but that's just me overlooking the errors and being too lazy to fix it haha.

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xenasgab November 30 2011, 06:38:08 UTC

Fantastic story I had to read it all in one go.

Hoping Leah doesn't get bit, she needs to tell someone about Vicky,
the pack, well that pack of bastards, deserve to be wiped out.

Since Sam basically let Jacob attack a pack member because his alphaness
told him a wolf's imprint wasn't really her imprint, hopefully Leah leaves the pack
for good.

Edward just needs to come out of the closet, really.