Curiosity Killed the Cat, Satisfaction Brought it Back, 1/?ladyladeSeptember 7 2011, 04:21:22 UTC
So this turned out pretty cracky (Stiles and Scott are totally the new Abbott and Costello), and there's no porn, but I hope you enjoy!
Stiles’ goal for high school is to explore all the creeptastic and abandoned structures in the woods around Beacon Hills. Like that Hale place that’s halfway incinerated and freaks Stiles out every time he goes there alone, because there’s something about the charred house that feels sad and lonely and somehow full, like ghosts actually exist and have taken refuge in the intact rooms. So since the Hale house (mostly) ruined his ability to explore these places alone, the natural thing to do is drag Scott along with him
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Re: Curiosity Killed the Cat, Satisfaction Brought it Back, 3/?ladyladeSeptember 7 2011, 04:31:28 UTC
There’s a metal bowl in the far corner of the cage, completely bone dry, and it knocks some sense into Stiles. Someone has caged a werewolf. He didn’t magically appear in the cage, this isn’t a hallucination or a weird dream; someone deliberately caught and caged a werewolf. Stiles cautiously walks around the cage, but the werewolf doesn’t move, not even when he can’t see Stiles at his feet or when Stiles bravely (stupidly) reaches in and fetches the bowl. He has to tilt it sideways to get it out, but then he’s got it and he walks back to Scott carrying it like a trophy
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Curiosity Killed the Cat, Satisfaction Brought it Back, 6/6ladyladeSeptember 7 2011, 04:44:42 UTC
Two weeks later, Stiles is not grinning.
He wakes up gradually to the feeling of something rubbing against his shoulder blades. The smooth pressure is nice, kind of like a massage, and Stiles drifts, half-asleep, until he realizes that he’s he really is awake and something really is rubbing against him.
As soon as he tenses the rubbing stops, and Stiles squeezes his eyes shut, sends a quick prayer to the ninja gods that he’ll pull this off, then tries to flip over while flailing his elbow backwards.
He flips over, but he doesn’t actually take down whatever was on him with an amazing hit to the face. The ninja gods have deserted him once again.
He’s surprised to find a guy on top of him. He’s slightly back-lit by the yellow of the streetlights, but Stiles can make out the dark hair and hazel eyes. There’s something familiar about the curve of his cheekbones, the line of his shoulders, but mostly Stiles’ brain is shouting, guy rape! Guy rape! Do not let him take off your boxers!Stiles flails, which is something he’s pretty good at
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Re: Curiosity Killed the Cat, Satisfaction Brought it Back, 6/6atsuko24September 7 2011, 05:59:15 UTC
Wow. I'm kinda in a state of shock at how much I loved this story and just how utterly GOOD it is. The banter between Stiles and Scott, the give and take relationship between Derek and Stiles--it's all so intriguing and the build up of trust just sucks you in. I love the story and I think you ended it perfectly.
The story foundation you set here makes me want to read more of this 'verse in the future, if you're willing? Does Derek still need to hide from the Argents (since Allison has already moved to Beacon Hills and stolen Scott's heart)? Or does he become kind of like a permanent guest in the Stilinski house? (the thought of Derek at the dinner table with Stiles and his dad cracks me up) Really, I adore this story and I would love to read anything and everything else you may decide to write in this 'verse in the future. ;)
Re: Curiosity Killed the Cat, Satisfaction Brought it Back, 6/6ladyladeSeptember 7 2011, 16:27:45 UTC
I loved this story and just how utterly GOOD it is.
Oh, god, you have no idea how amazing it is to hear that. I haven't actually written for Teen Wolf before, and I just sat down and banged it out (which almost never happens), and then I posted it and promptly freaked out. So thank you for calming my inner hater screaming, "BOO YOU WHORE."
I have at least one other prompt that I want to fill, but it would definitely be worth it to come back to this 'verse and dabble some more. I probably wouldn't write sequential stories like this (This is about as long and as plot-filled as I get), but there could be some one-shots. :D
Re: Curiosity Killed the Cat, Satisfaction Brought it Back, 6/6atsuko24September 7 2011, 17:23:08 UTC
Well I'm really glad you decided to get into the teen wolf fandom, because now I have another author to follow! Sorry if that rings any creeper bells but I don't think I can properly express my love for this pairing and how you illustrated it here :)
I look forward to reading your next fill! And any one-shots in this verse would be much appreciated! Yay! Now I'm all excited and wanting chocolate (well, I always want chocolate, but still--I'm excited!) :D
Re: Curiosity Killed the Cat, Satisfaction Brought it Back, 6/6mime0_0September 7 2011, 13:36:33 UTC
i very much enjoyed this story. the banter was in top form, i dont get why stiles didnt just hand him the bottle, although i guess ferral derek could of just riped it apart and died of dehydration, but back onto topic. i loved the story, and this you wrote it well, i noticed a couple of missing word type errors, it was in the line about the mummy slow walk (one of them was) it doesnt read as fluently as i think you intedned it to, but the story was awesome non the less.
Re: Curiosity Killed the Cat, Satisfaction Brought it Back, 6/6ladyladeSeptember 7 2011, 16:39:04 UTC
Yeah, there are probably some typos in there. I wrote this out in a little under three hours, and it doesn't have a beta; any mistakes I didn't catch are still there.
Stiles’ goal for high school is to explore all the creeptastic and abandoned structures in the woods around Beacon Hills. Like that Hale place that’s halfway incinerated and freaks Stiles out every time he goes there alone, because there’s something about the charred house that feels sad and lonely and somehow full, like ghosts actually exist and have taken refuge in the intact rooms. So since the Hale house (mostly) ruined his ability to explore these places alone, the natural thing to do is drag Scott along with him ( ... )
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“I’m pretty sure it’s a werewolf,” Stiles tells him.
Scott stares at him. “That’s not funny.”
“I’m not joking,” Stiles says, looking at the guy who has actually been frothing at the mouth. “Oh my god am I not joking.”
Scott sits up enough to peek around Stiles’ legs, and then falls right back down. “Oh my god, I think that’s a werewolf,” he says.
“You’re so smart, Scott, how ever did you figure it out?” Stiles says in falsetto.
“I’m pretty sure it was the canines,” Scott says.
Stiles wonders how Scott has been his best friend since the first grade and is still oblivious to sarcasm sometimes ( ... )
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He wakes up gradually to the feeling of something rubbing against his shoulder blades. The smooth pressure is nice, kind of like a massage, and Stiles drifts, half-asleep, until he realizes that he’s he really is awake and something really is rubbing against him.
As soon as he tenses the rubbing stops, and Stiles squeezes his eyes shut, sends a quick prayer to the ninja gods that he’ll pull this off, then tries to flip over while flailing his elbow backwards.
He flips over, but he doesn’t actually take down whatever was on him with an amazing hit to the face. The ninja gods have deserted him once again.
He’s surprised to find a guy on top of him. He’s slightly back-lit by the yellow of the streetlights, but Stiles can make out the dark hair and hazel eyes. There’s something familiar about the curve of his cheekbones, the line of his shoulders, but mostly Stiles’ brain is shouting, guy rape! Guy rape! Do not let him take off your boxers!Stiles flails, which is something he’s pretty good at ( ... )
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The story foundation you set here makes me want to read more of this 'verse in the future, if you're willing? Does Derek still need to hide from the Argents (since Allison has already moved to Beacon Hills and stolen Scott's heart)? Or does he become kind of like a permanent guest in the Stilinski house? (the thought of Derek at the dinner table with Stiles and his dad cracks me up) Really, I adore this story and I would love to read anything and everything else you may decide to write in this 'verse in the future. ;)
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Oh, god, you have no idea how amazing it is to hear that. I haven't actually written for Teen Wolf before, and I just sat down and banged it out (which almost never happens), and then I posted it and promptly freaked out. So thank you for calming my inner hater screaming, "BOO YOU WHORE."
I have at least one other prompt that I want to fill, but it would definitely be worth it to come back to this 'verse and dabble some more. I probably wouldn't write sequential stories like this (This is about as long and as plot-filled as I get), but there could be some one-shots. :D
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I look forward to reading your next fill! And any one-shots in this verse would be much appreciated! Yay! Now I'm all excited and wanting chocolate (well, I always want chocolate, but still--I'm excited!) :D
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Now I'm excited to do my next fill! Yay!
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The ninja gods have deserted him once again.
It had me in stitches. ♥
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Stiles is forever being deserted by the ninja gods. I don't think that boy could be subtle in an apocalypse.
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the banter was in top form, i dont get why stiles didnt just hand him the bottle, although i guess ferral derek could of just riped it apart and died of dehydration, but back onto topic. i loved the story, and this you wrote it well, i noticed a couple of missing word type errors, it was in the line about the mummy slow walk (one of them was) it doesnt read as fluently as i think you intedned it to, but the story was awesome non the less.
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Thanks for the comment!
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