Comments | teenwolf_slash: Fic: Roll Over; Derek/Stiles; Rated: NC17

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Fic: Roll Over; Derek/Stiles; Rated: NC17

Jul 07, 2011 23:10

Author: Jen
Title: Roll Over
Pairing: Derek/Stiles
Rating: NC17
Summary: Stiles does some research on pack dynamics.
Spoilers/Warnings: General spoilers for up to episode six, with complete disregard to what happened at the end. Slight D/s tones, given the subject matter. Over 5,000 words.

( 'I'm beginning to think that there's been a misunderstanding, here,' Derek says, his voice raw. He takes one step closer to Stiles, and another, like he's worried about spooking him, which Stiles thinks is absolutely hilarious considering that there's one animal in the room, and it's not the metaphorical elephant. The elephant is Stiles' gay for Derek, Stiles' mind helpfully supplies, as Derek stops in front of him, barely a breath away. )

rating:nc17, !char:derek, !pairing:derek/stiles, a:strokeof_genie, !char:stiles

Comments 67

laraneia July 8 2011, 07:14:26 UTC

This is fantastic! It needs to be a 'verse, like yesterday! :D I'd love to see Scott's reaction to this new development, lol.

strokeof_genie July 8 2011, 18:39:43 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm kind of planning a sequel sort of thing.

laraneia July 8 2011, 20:58:17 UTC

It's almost embarrassing how happy that makes me ^_^'

trust_your_lust July 12 2011, 02:18:47 UTC

Don't worry, you're not the only one! I was about to comment and demand more! One of the best fics I've ever read, in all of my fandoms.

I'm really hoping that there's some jealous and/or possessive Derek in the sequel!

kkeut July 8 2011, 07:42:35 UTC

holy hell, i don't even.

first, just the dynamics that you've set up between these two. i've seen people shipping derek/stiles and i was kind of 'eh' about it because i didn't really get it, but hello, i am now a convert. you write them perfectly together and i'm a little bit in love, not gonna lie. i also just love the way you write stiles because you keep his humor without overdoing it. and hnnnngh, the d/s-ness of it all is just... just keep writing, okay, especially if it's porn-y like this because this was fabulous. ♥

strokeof_genie July 8 2011, 18:49:53 UTC

Oh man, this is the best comment ever. Thank you so much! It really just started off as me being shallow and liking the look of them together, but I totally suck at writing pwp so I had to invent a reason. I'm so happy it worked for you! I'm kind of thinking about a sequel type of thing.

kkeut July 10 2011, 01:41:24 UTC

oh my, a sequel? i'm in love already. :)

megzchyna July 8 2011, 12:07:04 UTC

Wow, that was hot.
I am new to Teen Wolf and the Derek/Stiles ship.
But this fic, has hoooked me.

strokeof_genie July 8 2011, 18:56:49 UTC

Sweet! I'm so happy you liked it! I'd like more people to love this ship.

slashbluegreen July 8 2011, 12:07:29 UTC

ahrg, that was wonderful! The first Derek/Stiles I read, and it just fits with how I see them. Thank you for writing this!

strokeof_genie July 8 2011, 18:57:15 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you think that they're in character.

xo_swan_ox July 8 2011, 13:52:38 UTC

*claps* This was Amazing!!! Seriously amazing. I loved that you brought pack dynamics into the story then worked the whole relationship around it. It was fantastic.

strokeof_genie July 8 2011, 19:00:06 UTC

Thanks so much! I was kind of worried about the premise, so I'm glad you thought it worked! :D