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Ficlet Challenge!

Aug 29, 2011 19:03

Hello all, and welcome to one of the first activities we'll be hosting without an episode of Teen Wolf to kee us occupied! Welcome probably isn't the word we should use, perhaps "join us in mourning" is a more appropriate phrase.
Today's activity is a ficlet challenge!
( Here's how it will go. )

!challenge, !general

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Re: ticket, spider, bead strokeof_genie August 30 2011, 00:15:21 UTC

"Your dad pulled me over today," Derek says, and unsympathetically watches as Stiles flails and falls to the ground, startled out of his computer chair. "I got a ticket."

"What the hell, man? I thought cats were supposed to be the sneaky ones," Stiles clutches his chest through his shirt dramatically, and Derek wants to bare his teeth at the boy. Then Derek notices the beads of sweat on his forehead, the way his chest is heaving a little too much to be from Derek scaring him, and looks up to Stiles' computer to see - a blank screen. The boy turned off his monitor. Derek inhales deeply, smelling the teen's arousal. He walks toward the boy on the floor, ignoring as Stiles continues to talk. "Oh my God, you're not here to extort money from me, you're going to kill me because my dad was doing his job, aren't you."

Stiles sounds so doomed, his flushed face paling, and that just won't do. Derek kneels next to the boy and lays a hand on his stomach, spidering out his fingers and pressing down as Stiles tries to scoot away. "Not going to ( ... )

Re: ticket, spider, bead certainthings August 30 2011, 01:16:26 UTC

Mmmm.

I like the use of "beads of sweat".

Re: ticket, spider, bead strokeof_genie August 30 2011, 02:15:58 UTC

:D Thanks!

Re: ticket, spider, bead thefrozenheart August 30 2011, 01:25:00 UTC

I love u! ♥

Re: ticket, spider, bead strokeof_genie August 30 2011, 02:16:12 UTC

And I, you! ♥

Re: ticket, spider, bead chase_acow August 30 2011, 02:20:02 UTC

Yummy!

Re: ticket, spider, bead strokeof_genie August 30 2011, 03:01:59 UTC

:D Thanks!

*two thumbs up* novaberry August 30 2011, 04:49:38 UTC

HAWT! I think Derek catching Stiles jerking off/looking at porn is basically one of my favorite tropes in this fandom. Probably because it's such a teenage boy thing:DDD

Re: *two thumbs up* strokeof_genie August 30 2011, 20:59:15 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! ♥

Re: ticket, spider, bead and_the_damned August 30 2011, 05:18:14 UTC

oh holy little puppies! you made it hot. How did you do that? Mmmmmm Stiles hard cock makes me so happy. And scary Derek is my favorite forever. EXCELENT!!!

Re: ticket, spider, bead strokeof_genie August 30 2011, 20:59:54 UTC

:D I know that you love predatory Derek! ♥ So glad you liked it!

Re: ticket, spider, bead swing_set13 August 30 2011, 14:54:30 UTC

♥ You broke me.

Re: ticket, spider, bead strokeof_genie August 30 2011, 21:00:24 UTC

:D ♥ Thank you!

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Re: ticket, spider, bead strokeof_genie August 30 2011, 21:01:47 UTC

NEVER

BECAUSE YOU SHOULD LOVE ME ALWAYS

WHICH IS HOW LONG I WILL LOVE YOU

Hahaha, I'm glad you liked the fic! I'm glad it flowed for you, it seemed a little forced to me.

The bold was...lol. Made it look like weird emphasis.

Re: ticket, spider, bead oteap August 30 2011, 18:08:34 UTC

This is absolutely awesome. And hot. Perfect :D

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